You could post as an original work in AO3, I don't think you can import that big of a document into reddit(?? At least I think so. Not sure)

If your book is written anything like your post, keep it to yourself and go back to English class to learn the basics.

Somebody didn't get loved as a child

Why put anyone through something that looks like it was written when you had an aneurysm? Unless they're a masochist I can't imagine it would be a good time.

It's my first reddit post, I had the lines seperate but I guess they all got clumped together when I posted it. My apologies your royal twatness

Not a single punctuation mark either.... must be reddits fault for that too?

You need to post it on a writing sub. Not a book sub.

I'd recommend you try something like self-publishing on Amazon. You have a variety of options depending on how you want to monetize (or not) your work and you'll have a record for IP purposes. Then you can simply provide a link on Reddit (or anywhere else) so people can read it if they like.

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