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David_Umstattd t1_it9l8ph wrote
Reply to comment by KindlyOlPornographer in So I'm listening to Dracula on audiobook, and Van Helsing drives me insane. by KindlyOlPornographer
Show don’t tell. You show a person with broken English, you don’t just say “he had broken English” gives him a unique voice.
KindlyOlPornographer OP t1_ita64me wrote
You can have a character mention in an aside that Dr. Van Helsing has a unique way of writing or speaking that takes some getting used to.
BoredDanishGuy t1_itbcv5g wrote
His name should tell you that.
Van Helsing.
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