MarzannaMorena t1_iy2v92u wrote on November 28, 2022 at 9:21 AM

Reply to comment by rosecavan in I strongly dislike “smutty” books by [deleted]

For me, flowery language isn't a problem. I'm more turned off by graphic, clinical sounding descriptions.

rosecavan t1_iy2ygks wrote on November 28, 2022 at 10:10 AM

100%, that’s what I consider the “wrong aspects” to focus on. It’s way hotter (and less cringe) to read about how a character is reacting to an act, where their gazes linger and things like that, than descriptions of how things look.