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Economy-Cellist-5633 t1_ivyqs7z wrote

Reading Evelyn Hugo I understood exactly what they mean by “show, don’t tell” - there was so much telling with Monique that seem to go nowhere and could have been done better.

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Hi-isLiv OP t1_ivyr5e8 wrote

Ahahah right! It was also a bit condescending at times

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