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Farrell-Mars t1_j1mbo2h wrote

In a new book, you are required to have earth-shaking drama either happening or strongly foreshadowed in the first or second paragraph. Otherwise it’s “slow” and “confusing”.

Same with the much-overused “show don’t tell”. Nothing is explained. You’re just supposed to guess what’s going on by “watching”.

TIHI

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