[deleted] t1_j3t7a8y wrote on January 10, 2023 at 10:17 PM

Reply to comment by BeaconXDR in ...Grandma? (OC) by LeeroyM

I think it has real potential, the douchebag brother, the wife that appears normal to everyone so they think the guys crazy.

Clearly needs a bit more development but man, solid read. I hope they don’t make the wife into some overly unbelievable CGI character for the crawling on the floor and facial expressions.

I liked how you couldn’t tel if the wife was just playing along with him when he initially asked why she was doing that etc.

BeaconXDR t1_j3t8i57 wrote on January 10, 2023 at 10:25 PM

I'd imagine there's more to it that probably the mother character could fill in.

I read it like she knows about something about what is going on, and she doesn't want to talk about it with the husband. I could just never tell for sure if I was right or why she wouldn't want to help

[deleted] t1_j3t9szo wrote on January 10, 2023 at 10:33 PM

Oh yeah mother dearest could weigh in very nicely here!