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sydneydanger t1_j0xjo6a wrote

Your work is gorgeous as always but something about this one bothers me… the lighting from the trains headlight feels too smooth, doesn’t match the rest of the image. Still exceptionally well done though, makes me feel something.

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Fuck_Microsoft_edge t1_j0xn8jy wrote

Was just thinking this. There's dithering elsewhere in the same image, which makes the light beam look out of place.

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no_idea_bout_that t1_j0xxcy5 wrote

Train light should also have a lot of noise/movement from the snow blowing across the beam.

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pimp-bangin t1_j0z31x9 wrote

That's part of the problem for sure, tho I think the bigger problem is it's too smooth for this pixel art style

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