Is this you? I liked the main piano. I liked how it had, imo, the right amount of reverb on it. One thing that bothered me was that the rap drums in the intro aren't that strong and actually betray the level of skill that shows up later. When the guitars start ripping and the live drums take over its a much different song. For the intro drum's i'd suggest a different snare and maybe some effects on the drums in that pattern as a whole to help them feel like their building towards the guitar and live drums. Nice job on the rock parts though for sure. Keep at it dude! (If this is you lol)

I produce hip-hop too, so if you get a sec, here's me taking my power back from a harsh life.