I’m not 100% sure how I feel about it (the lyrics were a little hard for me to make out, though I do enjoy the Lo-Fi sound of the vocals). The music is interesting. It felt a tiny bit too…. Twee-excessively quaint or sentimental? I think that’s the word I’m looking for. But that may just be a personal preference issue. There were definitely elements of the music I enjoyed, but I’m not sure I can specifically say what they were. I really liked that it had the feel of some of my favorite songs where it just slowly builds and builds and repeats a certain refrain over and over until the end of the song.

(I’m thinking “Hey Jude” by The Beatles “Hellhole Ratrace” by Girls “Oh Sweet Nothing” by The Velvet Underground. Those all fit the format I’m talking about)

I enjoyed the metaphor for the relationship’s end that you used throughout. It fits because of the unreal grief we feel after both of those events.

Don’t know if you were looking for a critique, so I apologize if you didn’t want a critique like that. I’d say overall I enjoyed what you created. I’m glad I listened. Keep making new shit!