Submitted by Archives-H t3_yix4x9 in nosleep

She comes with a mask with no face and knocks on our doors, loudly uttering the quintessential halloween phrase: “Trick or Treat!”

And you’ve got to hand her candy. If you don’t- you die.

Nobody knows where she comes from or where she goes. She’s always been here, part of the community as long as anyone can remember, and she’ll be here long after. There are theories and where she comes and goes and what she is but none have ever been proved to be true.

There’s a fine line between bravery and stupidity, and occasionally you’ll have the daredevil teens or the newbie homeowner who wants to know- and tries to follow her.

Usually they come back, memory erased from the night. Or maybe they speak of something horrible beneath the mask, a face like no other. An image so savage and raw it was enough to drive the insane sane, and the sane- insane.

A couple years ago Danforth Davidsman moved in.

He was a cruel man who would take any opportunity given to inflict the most evil of things on people. He would call the police on neighbors having a simple drink, or kids having fun.

That year, that Halloween the girl in the mask with no face paid us all a visit, as usual.

Danforth didn’t listen to our warnings on the girl- though it wasn’t like we warned him well, if you know what I mean.

Danforth lived across the street, and when the girl knocked on my door, screaming “Trick or Treat!” I opened the door, and across the street I saw Danforth, arms crossed, a bible in his hand.

He was grunting menacingly and trying to lecture passers-by on the demons of Halloween and that we were inviting devils into our home.

I handed the girl- who oddly never held a bag a few packets of candy. She giggled and thanked me, just like any other child. “Hey-” I began, pointing at the now-screaming Danforth “I heard that man gives really good candy. You should go over there!”

“Really?” the girl gasped. If she had a face behind her mask her eyes would have been wide. “That’s awesome!”

I smiled and nodded- the girl wouldn’t kill him- it would take more than a simple refusal to kill. At first- there were stages to the effects of the girl.

I watched nervously and the girl in the mask skipped over to my neighbor, and elderly old woman who lovingly handed over six packets of candy. I’d heard she tried to follow the girl to wherever she came from, many years ago, and since then was terrified of what she had seen.

The girl thanked her loudly and finally skipped over to Danforth.

It was as if the whole neighborhood collectively held their breath then. We all knew what happened to those who refused the girl candy- nothing too life threatening- and we all wanted Danforth’s crimes against the community to be paid for.

“Trick or Treat!” the girl laughed. Even across the street her voice was joyful and loud.

Danforth looked at her, quite puzzled. He’d been quite loud in his preaching against the Halloween joy and was quite stunned when the girl seemed to completely ignore him and loudly scream (now twice), “Trick or Treat!” at him.

“Now listen here young lady,” Danforth began, “Halloween is a creation of evil, and any pure soul must know that-”

“Trick or Treat!” the girl once again exclaimed, ignored Danforth’s lecture. When Danforth did nothing but continue, the girl skipped away, happy as before, to the next house over.

Danforth started to go back to preaching. After a few lines he stopped. All eyes were really on him now. This wouldn’t be something to miss.

He began to cough now, and immediately we saw it: blood.

The man coughed again, and more blood erupted- and now, not just blood- but needles. He coughed more violently and more and more needles sprang from his throat, scratching him and falling on the floor.

It lasted about a minute until he stopped- and then he angrily charged forward- running at the girl.

Oh no.

He grabbed her by the neck and shook her, violently screaming, “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?” and a flurry of curses and prophetic condemnation.

The girl didn’t respond, only staring up at him with the mask of no face. Danforth shook her more violently- somehow more than before and asked: “What the devil have you done to me- TAKE that mask off YOUNG LADY- a GOOD GIRL LIKE-”

And then he tore off the mask and screamed.

I looked away, of course, and to my knowledge, so did anyone else who was watching. I looked into my hands and the bowl of candy I was holding. I heard screaming like I had never seen before, screams that went on and on-

Until the screams stopped, and I- although gingerly peered back outside.

Danforth was on his knees now, a blank look on his face. He stared into the torn off mask, now held in his hands. He remained silent. Unmoving. And then he collapsed.

The girl hopped and skipped away- she had collected her fill for the night. And though old, mean Danforth had torn her mask away- another had emerged, covering her face as the moonlight shone above.

She skipped her way off into the distance as we watched- and as she vanished we breathed a sigh of relief.

When I first moved there six years ago I thought it was an elaborate prank. An friendly urban legend to spook to kids- I have two. When the girl actually did come I thought it was part of the prank- and fortunately, gave her candy.

After Halloween I asked who had been the cheerful little girl that aligned perfectly with the legend- and to my surprise they all stayed true to their story.

Some of the older people shared stories about the girl- terrible tales, and gradually, I was left with no choice but to accept that things were just that way. But before I saw what happened to Danforth- there was always a tinge of doubt in my head.

After Danforth, though, did I realize it really was true.

Danforth, of course, regained consciousness the next day. He picked himself off the street and returned to his house, confused and still terrified. He made himself small and didn’t stopped bothering people.

At first.

The moment Christmas hit Danforth returned to his old and devilish ways of ringing up the cops whenever some poor soul was ‘too loud’ for his liking, or if the music they were playing was pissing him off in some way.

There wasn’t much we could do about him. He was rich, and held a mighty sway over the local government.

As the months passed and Halloween approached things Danforth began to grow more crazed. We’d thought he’d finally shut up about Halloween and abide by the legend, but no-

Now, Danforth was more vocal against the dangers of Halloween. A full month before Halloween and he was already speaking out.

And not just him now- no, now he had CRONIES. Two other Danforth-like copies who echoed anything he said.

“We’re gonna kill that menace!” he shouted, blasting really really annoying music as he went door to door, handing out flyers that told us not to feed her candy- claiming that we were giving the devil our souls.

“She’s going down!” one of his like minded copies echoed.

“We’re prepared this year!” said the other, holding up not one, but TWO bibles.

“Sure,” I murmured, slamming the door in their faces. By now Danforth had heard the legend for himself, and anything he’d choose to do now was entirely going to be his fault.

The legend tells us that the first visit is only a warning. Fail to appease the spirit of the girl and you disappear.

She takes you with her and you go away, never to return or to be seen again. And there’s no escaping her either- I took the kids and me away on vacation a Halloween once (lame, I know) and she was there, knocking on my hotel door.

“Trick or Treat!” and fortunately, I was prepared, handing over a protein bar I’d completely forgotten was in my bag. She looked at it, puzzled, but skipped away and vanished.

Nothing bad happened to me, and since that night I was always prepared.

Halloween season was really rolling in now, and Danforth and his cronies had begun to take down decorations, much to the cries of innocent children. We couldn’t wait until Halloween- then that weirdo would have his word’s worth.

At last, did Halloween finally roll in.

“Trick or Treat!” I heard, as knocks that were far too heavy pounded on the door.

I practically leaped over and opened the door, seeing the girl once more, a mask with no face still being worn- although a thin almost smile had now emerged.

“Here you go!” I cheered, handing her an especially large grouping of candy. The girl was practically bouncing with joy, and it was clearly not because of the candy. “Why are you so happy today?”

“Today I get more treats,” she replied, jumping up and down for joy. And now, in a more- almost adult tone, “More treats than I’ve ever had before. More treats that will bring peace and justice back to our community.”

“What?” I began, but by then, she was off, skipping away- but then being ambushed by Danforth and his cronies.

“You devil!” he called out, stopping the girl in her tracks. His cronies surrounded her. “I order thee to leave our holy community!”

One of his cronies began to chant something- I was too far away to hear. The other had both bibles up and was… waving them around? It wasn’t really very clear.

“In the name of all that is good and holy, I banish thee!” Danforth growled, reaching for the mask and preparing to rip it off- “I reveal to the lord the face of a devil- may he destroy you and bring peace to our fine land!”

I was too captivated too look away as Danforth ripped the mask off the girl’s face, revealing her true identity a face off- of nothing-

An endless void- and yet there were shapes- shapes that didn’t quite make sense. I didn’t see her face in full- no, just from the sides, and I quickly averted my eyes, fearing the impossible geometric shapes that riddled her face.

Danforth’s cronies screamed as they saw whatever else was in that void, and they began to run.

One of them tripped in the sidewalk- and tripped- yet impossibly being thrown backwards, right into Danforth’s house, shattering the windows. The other suddenly stopped in place mid-run and-

I don’t really have any words to explain what exactly happened to him. He froze in place and began to float just ever so slightly off the ground.

And he went up and up, slowly gaining speed, until he was never seen again.

And Danforth? Well, whatever happened to him was clearly worse than the others. He began to throw up now- but not needles, rather packets and packets of candies- all empty.

He began to choke, and yet more fell out.

The girl reached down on the ground and picked up her mask, putting it back onto her face. Danforth stopped vomited candy wrappers and looked back at the girl, who then placed her arms upon his shoulders- and whispered something.

Danforth’s eyes bulged in horror- and then they were gone- his eyes. They became candy wrappers that fell to the ground, floating away in the wind. The rest of him followed soon after, until he exploded in hundreds of orange and black candy wrappers, that drifted away under the gaze of the moon.

And the little girl, happy as ever, skipped into the the horizon.

Now, as I finish typing this up I hear that familiar sound of a knock on the door and those perfectly timed words: “Trick or Treat!”

Things are good now, without Danforth. We all pay our dues to the girl in the mask and not a single soul has been harmed since.

So if you ever see a little girl in a mask that had no face- do give her some candy. She really does appreciate it.

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spookymom_26 t1_iuljcwt wrote

She just wants candy! Clearly she doesn't care what kind - you gave her a protein bar - and she just was happy as can be.

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CrayonFox t1_iumdax1 wrote

Who knows - maybe she only comes out at Halloween because she spends the rest of the year powerlifting.

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spookymom_26 t1_iuqo2oc wrote

Not gonna lie. If she can do what she does I'm not going to be shocked if she does powerlift.

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Eino54 t1_iv3zf3e wrote

Honestly I'm so mad she didn't visit me this Halloween because I have some really cool Spanish Christmas food that is really nice and I would have loved her to try it.

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spookymom_26 t1_iv4jgcn wrote

I volunteer as tribute!! I wanna try Spanish candy and food but I don't do spices (very white yes😭) but I do want to try some of their candy even if it is hot.

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newbieboi_inthehouse t1_iuls1fl wrote

This is kind of wholesome. Just a sweet little girl minding her own business trick or treating door to door and receiving candies. Kind of made me smile when she giggled and jump around when receiving candy.

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SquidlyMan150 t1_iul37g0 wrote

You respect her and she will respect you

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ChainmailleAddict t1_iumd154 wrote

Legit, she even accepted a protein bar. Pretty reasonable tbh, she is a very fair-play kind of demon

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Aeirth_Belmont t1_iumx20x wrote

I was thinking more of the great cosmos itself. The one before everything. Mainly the shapes and void.

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Wishiwashome t1_iulrdwj wrote

Let’s see; She is polite. She gets rid of religious fanatic morons. Can we clone her?

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Lady_Grey_Smith t1_iuns24q wrote

We have a mean spirited neighbor she could visit. The SOB hates dogs and likes to threaten women and children.

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RebootDataChips t1_iumerw4 wrote

This is such a cute little Halloween fiend. I wonder if she would have accepted what I passed out last night, cute little pumpkin buckets with candy necklaces in them.

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marney_mootney t1_iumyx0r wrote

I would have been happy to have her stop at my house. I bought two bags of candy and had no visitors!

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Archives-H OP t1_iumz2bp wrote

Aw that's sad

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marney_mootney t1_iumzmwo wrote

There are only a few kids in my area and the parents take them to more populated neighborhoods. I still keep some candy in case of emergencies lol

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jamiec514 t1_iuob396 wrote

I'm in the same boat with you! I'm usually not home on Halloween so I wasn't sure if anyone actually walked up my street (I really thought they might since it's Main Street!) so I bought $25 worth of candy. I had four kids stop by and that's because my cousin brought his two sons and my best friend brought her two sons. That's it. Needless to say, I took a ton of candy to work today and made all the girls there very happy but I won't bother next year because even if the girl stops by I've always got some type of treat that I can give to her 🤣🤣

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Illustrious_Bison_20 t1_iv0a839 wrote

my partner and I bought a giant 5lb bag of candy to pass out at a local bars Halloween party, but 3 days before we tested positive for covid. now, we're forced to eat all the candy ourselves

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marney_mootney t1_ivai1om wrote

I’m sorry y’all got Covid and I hope you’re recovering quickly ❤️

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Illustrious_Bison_20 t1_ive4uly wrote

thank you! I'm much better. I guess I'll be ready for the girl with the mask next year, she's getting a king size for sure

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kbrand79 t1_iumw5wr wrote

Smart move, OP. How bad can she be if all she wants is some candy and she leaves everyone alone? Not bad at all.

Treat her with respect and she'll do the same.

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TheWildColonialBoy1 t1_iun0lqe wrote

I wonder how she would react to full sized candy bars?

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TheWildColonialBoy1 t1_iurvk71 wrote

Also, I can just imagine her and Sam from Trick 'r Treat sitting together in a nice, cozy living room, splitting their candy.

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Gall09 t1_iviuh63 wrote

Utter joyous disbelief, like Louise Belcher.

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Glittering_Ad_6370 t1_iun211q wrote

Honestly sounds like a reasonable girl, all she wants is respect and to have some fun.

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merrycat t1_iumtz3x wrote

We gave out those potato chip bags this year. I wonder if those would be okay too? Or does it have to be candy?

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MajaBadd t1_iumfun5 wrote

She sounds sweet

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Lacygreen t1_iul2fmj wrote

Hopefully he’ll finally learn next Halloween.

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gregklumb t1_iumky21 wrote

A fitting end for a zealot who tried to keep his neighbors from enjoying an adult beverage or two.

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RedBarron678 t1_iun7sd0 wrote

I only worry what happens if you can't give her anything at all. I hope she's understanding. I know she took a protein bar as an offering, but now I'm curious

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Archives-H OP t1_iun7vtk wrote

Bet she would accept a rock

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RedBarron678 t1_iun89qt wrote

I'd never do it on purpose though. Wonder if she'd take something like a hug or headpat as an offering?

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nightforday t1_iuqcex1 wrote

I have a feeling she'd take anything, as long as it's given in good faith.

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FacelessArtifact t1_iusa5jg wrote

When I was a kid, if people ran out of candy, they’d toss a penny or two in. We loved that too! Even the funeral homes gave out pencils! (If you were brave enuff to go).

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alfonso_101 t1_iunom0s wrote

I'd give her candy any day. What a sweet little girl, banishing the true evils from the world.

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StromedyBiggestFan t1_iunm22i wrote

I like her, she killed off the moody old bitches

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Urfavoritebi t1_iunxp7m wrote

That seems like the goal 🤭 like she just wants the community to be full of nice people so she asks everyone for candy and gets rid of the ones who are rude or mean to her.

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Hour_Task_1834 t1_iuo4ls9 wrote

What would one do if they didn’t have any candy at home, would she be forgiving? I feel as though she would. would she wait if asked?

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Archives-H OP t1_iuo6yww wrote

There are tales of those who have hugs. Those who were genuine survived and were blessed with good luck for the season.

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MsVindii t1_iunzb6s wrote

My whole town could use some visits from this little girl. I’d happily give her candy, small price to pay for community justice.

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Well_shitnuggets t1_iun7mwr wrote

I’d get the kiddo a treat bag and fill it up

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Urfavoritebi t1_iunxh7t wrote

Oh I would love to have her stop at my house! I would give her the best piece. She sounds really sweet. Just wanted some candy! She even excepted the protein bar.

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IndieMedley t1_iuoyorr wrote

Well, she seems kind! More of a spirit testing the kindness of others, I’d say. Even if you aren’t a Halloween person, can’t ever hurt to give some little ones some fun in their night. She doesn’t hurt anyone with the decency to show friendliness to a child, after all

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Minimum_Literature t1_iumc407 wrote

Ah yes very cool, if I dont give candy I die, ah yes.

Just say hi to my claymore romba

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MintFox1998 t1_iunr0kn wrote

Get wrecked, Danforth, you bible thumping tool

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RebaKitten t1_iunc6wf wrote

Absolutely, give this girl some candy!

Great story, thanks for sharing it.

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Irisheyes1971 t1_iuov2d2 wrote

Seems a little unfair the two cronies disappeared with him, considering it’s their first year. Not going to lose sleep over it though.

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Archives-H OP t1_iuoxq24 wrote

what if Danforth used his weird magics and cloned himself tho

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FormalExperience6155 t1_iurd1ms wrote

Sounds like she's just trying to keep the community happy during Halloween. Making sure everyone gives out candy. Lol

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allaboutwanderlust t1_iupgzh7 wrote

I wonder if she’s a god of some kind. You give her an offering (candy or a protein bar), and it appeases her. She seems very nice, though. Will have candy ready for her

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ihatepineaples t1_iupj5n1 wrote

She seems pretty chill and helps get rid of all the pesky neighbors

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ScreamingBirdBoi t1_iup8lau wrote

I wanna be friends with her she sounds fun to be around!!

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Fine_Reindeer_6105 t1_iupnevl wrote

You give her candy and she lets you keep your sanity and your life, seems like a fair trade to me.

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criticallycrafty t1_iuqh6aa wrote

A little candy is a small price to pay for total peace in your community. You give her candy and she keeps everything nice.

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UnwillingHero22 t1_iuytrr4 wrote

And all that because he didn’t want to give her any more candy?!? Dumb move, very dumb…

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xtiyfw t1_iy4ffun wrote

Is it weird that I want to make friends with the local halloween eldritch candy girl?

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Splurkin t1_iuoq4t5 wrote

She accepts tricks or treats you dont have to give candy at all if you could play a good trick although the protein bar probably lands in the trick category if not knowing it wasnt a candy bar lol

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koolangit t1_iupffik wrote

what happens if you don’t open the door when she knocks?

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Archives-H OP t1_iupfhus wrote

Something not too bad but significantly annoying happens.

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UpliftinglyStrong t1_iuvsetu wrote

Well, have you seen a silent, tall dude in a white mask? I’d say that he’s one of the things you have to worry about on Halloween.

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EmperorValkorionn t1_ivdojiu wrote

What happens if someone sleeps through the event? Someone who has a very very heavy sleep and not even hear the voice? I am asking for a friend

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LeagueLoreHunter t1_iw6wbzl wrote

Seems like she only asks if people can actually provide and if they know about her. Op's kids seem fine despite never paying tribute, and she didn't seem to ask other hotel guests and staff despite going out there.

If you were deep asleep when she was coming through, you'd probably get off the hook or she would wait for you to wake before asking.

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