Submitted by fwoopfwop t3_ytp5fa in nosleep

Part 1- You are here

Part 2

We moved into our new house just a few weeks ago.

Yesterday, though now it seems so long ago, my mother handed me a strange and tattered list. Her eyes were unfocused and her movements were shaky. I asked her what was wrong, but she shuffled away without a word.

Confused, I began to read.

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Welcome to your new house! However this was delivered to you, it is vital that you follow each and every rule very carefully as long as you live here. Only you-- Whoever received the letter is bound to the rules and their consequences. Please remember that any writing in strange penmanship is meant to deceive you. Usually, these will be crossed out, but if they are not, please cross it out yourself. The rules are as follows:

1) If anything goes wrong in the events of rule 2 or you don't follow rule 3, you must ^(go outside)~~~~~~~~. head to the kitchen and pour sea salt in a circle around you before covering your ears. Once the clock reads 5:00, you can clear away the salt and go back to what you were doing prior.

2) If, at night, you hear a window creak open and you wake up, you must not show you're awake. Count to 30 in your head and try your best to go back to sleep. If something goes wrong, follow rule 1. ^(listen to the voices. I would never lead you astray, right?)

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After an exasperated sigh, I stopped reading and let go of the worn out paper, watching it drift to a stop, going right past the table I'd intended it land on, and going straight onto the floor. What a joke.

Obviously, my mother must have thought it would be hilarious to mess with me like this. I stormed into the living room, where she sat in the recliner watching a Wheel of Fortune rerun on the cable TV. I showed her the list. "What even is this?" I asked.

She stared at me blankly, looking a little confused. "..I don't know, what is it, hon?"

I tried to tell her that she'd given it to me just a few minutes before, but she denied it and said she'd been watching TV for the past half an hour. I knew I wouldn't get anywhere with it, so I walked away.

On my way upstairs, I heard crying. I rounded the corner and found the source: A girl facing away from me with her hands covering her face; my older sister.

I set a hand on her shoulder, asking her what was wrong. She turned around and I found that she was quite obviously not crying, but instead had an eerily calm and happy expression. Something about her face felt off. We sat there staring at each other for a moment before she ran towards the stairs, giggling.

I ran after her, but when I reached the stairs, she was gone. I went to ask my mother about it, but she frowned and told me that it was rude to lie; my sister had gone out that morning. Afterwards, she asked if I was feeling alright.

I nodded and ran upstairs, passing a note on my sister's door that hadn't been there before.

going out to a party with friends. be back at 10 PM. call if something's wrong. -Sara

I dashed towards the table where I'd dropped the rules and continued reading frantically.

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3) Do not, under any circumstances, go outside at night, and if you find yourself outside of the house when night falls, stay out until day. If you don't follow this rule for whatever reason, follow rule 1.

4) If you see a family member facing away from you in a hallway and crying, stay away. It's not your family member. If you fail to do this, for 3 nights after the incident, you will be hunted down. During this period, none of the protective rules will apply. Nighttime is considered 10PM to 5AM.

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I froze. I wanted to believe this was a joke, but my sister had never been a good actor. If it were fake, she'd have fallen over laughing before she could finish it; not to mention how could she vanish into thin air.

I checked the clock. 9:31 PM. Half an hour until showtime. I gathered up a kitchen knife and decided I'd rather stay somewhere public, where someone can protect me. Slipping the knife into my pocket, I headed downstairs and grabbed my mother's car keys.

I googled what places might be open at night, but the only results were restaurants, and so I headed to the airport. Yes... to the airport, with a knife. I had bigger things on my mind at the time.

When I got there, I glanced at my watch. 9:59. I watched as it ticked closer and closer to 10 PM. Obviously, though, it must have been a bit off, as it showed 10:00:08 when I heard the glass shattering.

I watched in horror as a huge quadrupedal creature with smooth jet black skin and no eyes scuttled into the airport with passerby's not reacting. I thought I even saw the creature run through them once or twice.

Of course.

How could I be so stupid?

Obviously they wouldn't acknowledge it as a monster. The rules had clearly stated that this was my burden and mine alone.

Its jaws snapped from left to right as it sniffed the air, turning to face me while hissing. It bounded through the airport at me. Not knowing if it would be injured and not having much to lose, I swung at its exposed stomach.

It stepped back, looking mildly annoyed. Then... it charged me again. Great, I'd succeeded in giving it a stomachache and securing myself a spot in the afterlife.

I instinctively dashed to the side and simply got the crap clawed out of my shoulder instead of my collarbone. I pushed through the crowd and surprisingly didn't get yelled or cursed at, or acknowledged at all.

I reached a dead end at the Bath & Body works shop. Why they had that at an airport, I didn't know. Desperately, I picked up a bottle of perfume and threw it at the monster

It reared back, repulsed. I quickly grabbed a can of shaving foam.

I sprayed shaving foam into its nose. After discovering it could not, in fact, breathe the stuff, it began coughing. Obviously, I ran away while I could.

I dashed into a side room and sat there for a moment, catching my breath. I heard an outraged roar as it stormed the airport, unable to smell for me.

Shakily, I picked up a rock and threw it at the window behind me, hoping to shatter it. Unfortunately, it bounced off.

The creature turned around, storming into the room. I saw its nose twitch and as it spun around, looking for me. Unfortunately, I saw it began to slow down as it turned towards me, and so I sprayed it in the nose again with my trusty shaving foam.

I dashed around it as the monster tried to reorient itself, slashing my cheek in the process. I found a side entrance, likely for employees, and escaped into the parking lot.

I fumbled with my mother's keys and finally managed to start the car. I heard it breaking through the glass- would they fix it if it was caused by a monster?- and tearing through the parking lot.

I managed to veer onto the highway, hoping to mix my scent with a hundred other people and their polluting cars.

Not being able to smell me, the creature seemed to be checking the most densely populated areas first. Taking this into consideration, I turned into the first exit and parked on the side of the road.

Then, I walked to the nearest place devoid of people, which just so happened to be an abandoned warehouse. I hid behind one of the shelves, hoping to find some medical supplies. Instead, I found a cell connection.

So that brings me to where I am right now; posting what's happening to me on Reddit, just in case I don't live through this. If I survive, I'll post an update.

If I don't... well, you know what happened to me.

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SnooDoggos6969 t1_iw5xwx3 wrote

Stay safe OP. Update us when possible.

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fwoopfwop OP t1_iwdlcnm wrote

Working on it. Internet sucks, phone barely working.

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AllCoolNamesRTaken2 t1_iw6wc6z wrote

You could spray yourself with the spray or when you take a shower, use the shaving foam stuff to wash off with...

Good luck. Hoping to see an update!

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NatNat29 t1_iw60m0h wrote

I hope you’re okay! I need an update… 👀

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ZombieGnome1986 t1_iw6u6uc wrote

Keep is updated if you can and grab another tin of shaving foam during the day. Once you have day one down its two more to go. Be safe op we will try and come up with some ideas. But please stay safe and good luck

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EducationalSmile8 t1_iw88dnf wrote

Well, you're smart enough to make a monster lose it's sense of smell by using "shaving foam" , and, now that this ordeal is gonna last for 3 days I just hope you're smart enough to make it out alive... Be careful OP.

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CatrinaBallerina t1_iw7ycq8 wrote

Should’ve used that salt scrub in BB&B and surrounded yourself with it!

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RickC154 t1_iw85zln wrote

Good call. I forgot that they carried that item. I will be buying some next time I am in one.

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Gotone73 t1_iw7me0t wrote

Please Check your wrist or your HUD for extra lives - just in case, keep a cat close by, it might save you from death 9 additional times.

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fwoopfwop OP t1_iw8cw1i wrote

Thanks, I'll make sure to stop by the animal shelter.

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xmanq69 t1_iw7lpn1 wrote

Didn't he say night was between 10:00 p.m. and 5:00 a.m. okay so what's 9:00 a.m. where I am right now it might not be there where he is right now but if he doesn't post by tomorrow guys he's dead 100% certified deadified bona fide the monster got him probably chewing on his bone marrow or something damn to think he almost died on a Saturday or Sunday

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-Xx_CpS_xX- t1_iwcio3u wrote

the monster wouldn't chew on someone who attacked it with shaving foam 💀💀

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Honest-Lump2308 t1_iw66kjs wrote

It’s been quite sometime now since you posted. Hope you’re ok.

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Ciarrachey9 t1_iw7ceqa wrote

Hoping you make it through the night! Update us as soon as you can!

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HorrorFinish167 t1_iw813g4 wrote

Oof, Cursed areas can really be hard, I'd suggest stocking up on the monsters Silver bullet (in this case shaving cream) and possibly ingraning all of the rules in your head. Try to keep sanity and do NOT stab any family members you suspect to be monsters, You could just be paranoid and tired. and try to get fit so you can outrun the monsters on foot

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fwoopfwop OP t1_iw8c114 wrote

I don't think it's really the shaving cream but more so its sense of smell. For your second suggestion, I'm not sure where I left the list, and I didn't read it through fully while I was trying not to die. I'll either have to go back during the day or hope it gets mystically re-delivered.

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AphroditesGoldenOrbs t1_iwx4auq wrote

Were there more rules than you included at the beginning of your story? (At least make sure to scroll back and memorize THOSE...that's at least a START.)

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tina_marie1018 t1_iw7xvxx wrote

Please stay Safe

Please keep us updated

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rainbowshabmagic t1_iw9j65f wrote

I wonder whats going to happen if you hand over the rules to someone else....

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shogun111 t1_iw9lxzm wrote

Stay strong OP for the night is dark and full of terrors

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Unusual_Plant_684 t1_iw70fv2 wrote

You could always look for salt and follow rule 1 maybe that will help. Anyway stay safe.

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PignaBatman t1_iw7ebwb wrote

Rule 4 stated that none of the protective rules would apply, and I belive rule 1 is one of them. I guess the only option for him is to somehow survive until the monster stops haunting him

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hellochoy t1_iw81jxg wrote

He broke rules 3 and 4, I wonder which one the monster is there for... maybe whatever else is hunting him just hasn't gotten there yet? Maybe the salt circle could help for the rule #3

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PignaBatman t1_iw824gq wrote

Rule 3 is for going outside during nighttime, which is considered to start after 10 PM. He came out before that, and therefore saw the monster at 10:00:08 in the airport. Rule 3 was not broken.

The monster is there for rule 4, speaking to the girl which wasn't his sister. Following rule #4, the monster will hunt him down for 3 nights, after 10 PM

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LeEpiclyUnepic t1_iw99vgj wrote

Hope you're still alive.

Definitely stock up on whatever seems to be working against the creature hunting you. Maybe find something you can put on yourself to hide your scent. Also consider it's possible that the monster will change from night to night, so stay alert.

It seems from what you described that others cannot see you or the monster when the hunt begins. With that in mind, you should prepare to be all on your own for the next 2 nights.

The creature is clearly nocturnal, so you could try shining a light in its eyes if you're being chased to stun it. Alternatively, you could pour something onto its eyes, like paint or some other thick substance. As well, it seems to have a keen sense of smell. Maybe having it near a rancid scent will disorient it, which would allow you to run if necessary.

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-Xx_CpS_xX- t1_iwciwps wrote

21 hours from last comment (and from being online). I hope you are just typing something new thing down.

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RaffaRay t1_iwlke8e wrote

I would personally go for something more flammable than shaving foam. Just an idea but, hairspray usually works well with fire, wouldn't you agree?

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Image_1071 t1_iwsckm3 wrote

It said it’d come after you after 3 days, why’s the creature there on the first night?

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