Submitted by girl_from_the_crypt t3_10jbwml in nosleep

I feel everything.

That's not only how it is right now, but also how I answered Nick's question. I'm obviously writing this from home; I just figured I should mention that this time. So, some time has passed since this happened. I'm kind of beaten right now, but I'm enjoying the luxury of taking a breather. Casimir is currently acting as a sort of pillow for me. I'm not usually this clingy but I need the support right now. That out of the way, let me try and tell you what happened down in hell. I hope I can make this at least somewhat comprehensible, because to be honest, I'm all over the place.

Nick took it upon himself to accompany me to the prisons. Walking beside him made me feel sick. Actually, just looking at him made me feel sick. I knew arguing with him wouldn't help the matter, so I kept my mouth shut, really boiling the blood beneath my skin.

"Aw, don't scrunch up that pretty little face," the Beast commented snidely. "You'll have your miller back in a few days. Just be a good girl and do my bidding."

"You're not even gonna tell me where he is? Or what you want from me?"

"That's a no to both those questions," he replied. "But don't worry about Hettmann. Do you really think I'd dispose of my favorite servant because of a small spat? And you'll find out what I need you to do soon enough."

"If you're going to forgive him anyways, why the fuck would you hurt him?" I hissed.

The Devil smiled thinly. "My wrath is as fleeting as all my emotions. The trick is to really lean into them. I do so without reservation, just as everyone should. Jacek knows this. All my acolytes do. They're used to it, and they accept it willingly."

I took a deep breath, trying to steady myself, but it was futile. My mind was racing. I hadn't felt this confused and shaken in ages. Getting my soul back was what I'd always wanted, but I hadn't thought it would be so painful. Jacek having been torn from my arms had left me in utter turmoil, more so than I could have ever imagined. I tried to block everything out, tried to shut the sense of loss off behind that same milky pane of glass I had gotten used to ever since the rabbit had run off on me, but it was like the partition was unreachable. I was whole again, for better or for worse.

"Where are we going? Doesn't every hellsphere have a prison?"

"Sure. But I don't want to give you just any prisoner."

The meaning behind those words instantly began to dawn on me. My heart, still pounding like a sledgehammer, dropped into my stomach. "No," I said softly. "Please, you're not seriously thinking of…"

"Let an old man have his fun, Fiona. No backtalk."

All I could do was follow at his heel, feeling rather like a small dog. Out on the street, we didn't have to push and shove—everyone we came across instantly jumped aside, making way for Nick to stride through. I stumbled after him in the wake, struggling to keep up. We changed spheres via the elevator. This time, the security spider scuttled all the way into the corner, not saying a word the whole ride. When the ding announced our arrival, we stepped out into faintly familiar, green-tinged surroundings.

"Welcome to Envy," Nick proclaimed dryly, spreading his arms in a mock gesture of hospitality. "Home to… well, just another kind of scum."

"My brother's an inmate here? Why?"

"He'd be better fitted to answer that," the Devil replied, taking up his powerwalk once again. He led me all the way into the center of the sphere, where an absolutely enormous building loomed overhead. A giant slab of concrete, bigger than anything I'd ever seen before, frightening in its sheer size alone. Here, the crowds seemed to grow especially thick. I noticed a bunch of people standing at the sides of the entrance. The prison was heavily guarded, from the looks of it. Of course, none of them did anything to stop us.

The inside of the prison was much like what I'd expected. I've never been to a human prison, but you know what they show you on tv and in the movies. This one looked rather similar to that kind of thing, at least on first glance, except that it was obvious that nobody ever cleaned. The smell of vomit, blood and feces hung thickly in the air, and it took a lot of willpower not to gag. The corridor I soon found myself standing in was incredibly long, thousands of tiny barred cells lined up on either side, the inmates within them all in a row as if on display. Some cells were slightly bigger than others, but quite a few offered barely enough room for a person to stand in. I tried not to meet the eyes of any of the people we passed by, not the prisoners' and not the wardens', either. The one thing I couldn't ignore was the noise, though.

Screams and wails filled the hallway, some loud and furious, the sounds of raving lunacy; others low, cracked and broken. Moans of pain, sobs and weeping. Pointless cries for help praying for mercy. I didn't want to imagine what the wardens spent their time doing in this hole. I was certain that a normal prison on the surface was probably like a daycare center compared to this. The Devil stopped one of the passing wardens—a curvy lady with green skin and a resting bitch face, dressed in red latex like a nightmare dominatrix—and demanded to be taken to inmate 10789, or some other such large number. She agreed demurely, taking us up several floors before stopping by a cell that looked vaguely familiar from the video I'd seen. I took a deep, steadying breath, trying to assume some semblance of composure. Nothing could have prepared me for the encounter that was about to happen, though.

Jeremy Novak was lying butt-naked asleep on the hard floor of his dirty, reeking chamber. His hair was matted and greasy, like he hadn't washed it in a year, and stubble lined his jaw. That was really saying something, considering neither of my brothers ever managed to grow anything more than peachfuzz in terms of facial hair. He stank of sweat, urine and pus; he looked severely malnourished and just overall three minutes away from death. I couldn't imagine how long he'd spent in this state. He was covered in blood, wounds in various states of healing littered his body. The streaks on his back made it seem like he'd been whipped while the marks on his thighs and arms spoke of burnings and electric shocks. The sight was very nearly too much to handle.

Nick entered the cell without hesitation. When I didn't follow right away, he grabbed me by the arm and flung me inside with such force that a sharp yell escaped my throat. This caused my brother to stir. He kicked his legs a little, groaning and letting out a whine that nearly broke my heart. Nick growled. "Get up, you piece of shit!" he barked, lifting his foot and stomping down on Jeremy's unmoving wrist. I gasped and Jem shot up, his eyes flying open.

"This is your big day, Novak," the Devil hissed, delight lacing his voice like poison. "Today's the day you're getting out of here."

"What are you on about?" Jem asked in a gravelly, broken voice.

"You've got a visitor."

Jeremy lifted his head, milky, dull eyes fixing me in silence. I couldn't speak, feeling a pang of empathy that nearly caused my stomach to turn. Somehow, I couldn't reconcile the idea of this man being a cold-blooded killer and the sight of my little brother in my head. I held his gaze, trying to fight the cold rigidity that had taken a hold of me. Then, to my utter horror, a grin unfurled on his lips. "Look at that. The prom queen," he spat, upper lip lifted in a sneer. "What the fuck are you doing in here?"

I swallowed thickly. "I'm going to take you with me. I'll take you home, where I'll perform a dangerous ritual with you as a conduit, which you will not survive."

"What?"

Nick sighed. "Miss Fiona needs a casket for a spirit she's trying to get rid of. For the time you're up top, I will supply you with a corporeal form like you have it down here. You'll be able to move, feel, eat and drink. Think of how nice a break that'll be for you. Now, after she's killed you, your soul is gonna be taken back to me, and we'll stick you back in here where you belong. Sound good? Good."

"The fuck?"

"Hey, bastard, nobody asked for your opinion. Follow your sister's orders and don't even think about running off, because I swear to you, I'll send Hettmann after you again," Nick hissed.

I flinched at the mention of Jacek's name, and to my surprise, so did Jem.

"Alright! Christ!" my brother cried out, pushing himself off the ground with a pained moan. His bones cracked and he winced as he shifted his weight onto his feet. He squinted at me with hateful eyes. "Remember your little fuckboy, sis? You know, short goth guy, mean eyes, really deep, creepy voice? Imagine my surprise when he came to collect me. Damn small world, isn't it?"

"Yep."

"Well." Jem shuddered, giving a nervous grin. "I'm not keen on seeing that shitstain again, let me tell you. Brutal little motherfucker; dunno what he’s compensating for.”

“Will you shut up?” Nick groaned. “You’re giving me a headache. You only have one job, do it, come back, and do not get up to anything stupid.”

“Copy that,” Jem muttered.

Nick grabbed both of us by the wrist, and before I could even process what was happening, we weren’t in the prison anymore. In fact, we had left hell altogether and were now standing in the middle of my living room, right in front of Casimir, who was typing away on his laptop. Our sudden appearance caused him to scream, scrambling out of his seat and ripping off his headset. “What the fuck?” he cried out, wild eyes darting between myself, our brother and the Devil.

It was weird seeing Cas again. I suddenly felt extremely warm and fuzzy inside, despite the obvious horror in his stare. I threw my arms around his neck almost as if on instinct, and he immediately reciprocated. It felt like a blanket being pulled around me. Little brother. I had held him before, but it had never made me feel this safe and comforted. This was pretty great.

“Whoa,” he mumbled, pulling me closer. “Fi, what–what am I looking at, help me out here. Is that…?”

“Hey, Cas,” Jem drawled, dropping down on the sofa.

Casimir reluctantly let go of me, throwing our sibling a brief glance before going back to gawking at the Devil. Nick smirked back shamelessly. “You, Casimir Novak, are even more attractive in person,” he said, voice husky and vaguely threatening.

Cas’ brows furrowed. “Do we know each other?”

“I know you. But don’t worry about that now. Keep enjoying life, Casimir. I’ll see you.”

And in the blink of an eye, Nick had disappeared into thin air.

“Was that the Devil?” my little brother inquired.

“Yeah,” I replied breathlessly.

“Jesus, what a creep.”

“Look, I’ll tell you what happened later. Jeremy… The Devil had me take him for our ritual. We should get that over with.”

I heard Jem snort from behind me. Cas merely stared at me blankly. “You’re saying we’re gonna kill Jem?”

“I’m already dead, Cas,” Jeremy answered in my stead. “Don’t mean a thing at this point.”

There was it again, that powerful wave of sadness. I still couldn't believe this. This was Jeremy. My baby brother Jeremy, the same Jeremy I'd grown up with, the same Jeremy I'd played hide-and-seek in the barn with, the same Jeremy who I'd always done my homework with after school. Casimir appeared to be similarly affected. He looked on in confusion, his eyes wide and glossy.

“I can’t–Fiona, we…” he stammered, his gaze helplessly flitting between us.

I sighed deeply. This was exactly what I’d been dreading. I didn’t want to have to go into this, I didn’t want to think about what we were about to do. I couldn’t leave Casimir hanging like that either, though. I ended up sitting down with him and explaining everything, somehow managing to coherently stammer together what had happened to Jacek and what Nick had revealed to me before taking me to the prison.

“So you got your soul back? I’m so happy for—” Cas’ voice trailed off when he saw the look in my eyes. “Fuck.”

“I need to do this, and fast. I need to get everything sorted, I can’t… If I don’t see him again, if I don’t see Jacek again, I think I’m gonna die or something…” I confessed in a shaky voice, clenching my hands into fists to keep my fingers from trembling.

“Okay,” Cas said simply. “Okay, we can… we can do this. Don’t worry. Everything’s gonna be okay.”

“You just said okay thrice and I still don’t believe you.”

“No, no, it will be, trust me. So… Jem. What do we do with Jem?”

“Yeah, what do we do with Jem?” Jeremy echoed.

“I haven’t seen you in so long,” Cas remarked, still in utter disbelief. “What the hell did you do?”

“The princess told you already.” Jem gestured at me, lifting a haughty brow. “No need to get into the nitty gritty of things.”

“Oh, you think?” Casimir shot back, shaking his head. “No, no, no, you’re gonna tell me what the fuck you did.”

“Why?”

“You’ve been gone for years. You ran out on me, on all of us, you just vanished; and now, you’re apparently dead and also a serial killer?” Cas let out a soft gasp of incredulity, still shaking his head frantically. “Are you seriously blaming me for wanting to know what in God’s name happened to my brother?”

Jem shrugged. “Well, I offed a bunch of sluts, and that’s that. Nothing more to it, to be honest.”

It was hard to keep my composure at his words. Looking at him, I didn’t even feel like I was facing my younger brother, but a complete stranger. Jem regarded me with a strangely detached expression, like he didn’t care about seeing us at all. Like he didn’t care about anything. I suppose it made sense; he’d spent the last couple years incarcerated in the hellsphere of Envy, being consistently tortured. I doubt anyone would be able to muster up a lot of emotion after something like that. But he was still the same man who, while alive, had apparently committed a series of murders. I would be lying if I said I didn’t want to know what exactly had happened.

“I know you want to ask, and you should know that I don’t want to answer,” Jem stated. “If you want a story about me, ask that prick Hettmann.”

“Don’t talk about Jacek like that.”

“Oh, come off it, you spoiled brat. Do what you gotta do and don’t waste my time.”

“You have an eternity of torture waiting for you!” I argued in bewilderment.

“I’d prefer the cell to having to look at you all day,” he growled.

“How the fuck can you even say that? What’s wrong with you?”

“Stop it, Fiona. Just stop. I won’t talk to you. I’d rather eat my own shit than talk to you.”

I took several deep, steadying breaths. “Fine. So I guess there’s nothing left to say. Cas, where’s Aleksei?”

“He stepped outside there for a moment, I’ll go get him,” Casimir offered, quick to stand up and make his way over to the door. When he passed me, I noticed that his fists were clenched to the point of his knuckles turning white.

I swallowed thickly as I turned to avoid my other brother’s gaze. “I should get you something to cover up,” I remarked, moving to get up myself.

“You do that,” Jem called after me as I went upstairs.

I couldn’t stand staying with him for another second.

I spontaneously decided to rifle through Casimir’s belongings for some clothes, making a mental note to ask forgiveness later. I found some sweatpants and a t-shirt, and just as I turned around, my breath caught in my throat. Jeremy was standing in the doorway, directly blocking my path. His lips were curled into a gentle, reassuring smile, which would have been a nice enough sight if it were to have reached his eyes. He lifted his head, tilting it to one side, then the other, considering me.

“Hey again.”

“Get out of the way,” I immediately said, puffing my chest out and fixing my eyes on his. I couldn’t let him see how much he was scaring me just by standing nearby.

“In a minute. Fiona, I changed my mind. I do wanna share what I did after all.”

I didn’t like his tone. My eyes flitted to his hand and I stifled a shocked yell when I spotted the knife he was holding. He must have gotten it from the kitchen. I instantly realized I’d made a big mistake; I should have never let him out of my sight. Fuck.

“I wanna show you,” Jeremy said, almost sweetly, as he proceeded into the room.

“Jeremy, drop that,” I warned him. “Don’t do anything stupid.”

“What, you think I care? They’re gonna torture me down there anyways, might as well have some fun up here. Make it worth it,” he explained with a carefree shrug.

I backed off, nearly tripping over my own feet. “Cas is gonna be back in a moment. He won’t be alone.”

“That’s fine. A moment’s all I need, really.” Another step towards me.

My back was pressed up against the wall by now.

“God, I actually dreamed of this, you know,” he whispered almost reverently as he closed the distance between us and lifted the blade to my neck, not cutting, just… caressing.

I stared into his gleaming eyes, searching, looking for something I slowly realized was gone. “Why?” I breathed.

“You actually have no idea, do you? You have no idea what it was like for us. I did the exact same thing as Casimir is still doing, you know. Well, not exactly the same, but I know he’d understand if he only admitted it to himself.” He dropped his arm, grabbing onto my skirt as if moving to lift it. I didn't want to see where he was going with this. In one swift movement, I tossed the bundle of clothes I was still holding into his face, then kicked him in the crotch with all my might. Jeremy cried out, dropping the knife, and I hurried to pick it up before boring towards the exit, slamming the door shut behind me as my brother howled in fury. At the very same moment, I heard Cas and Aleksei come back inside.

"Help!" I shouted, straining to hold the door shut. Jem was trying to tear it open from the inside. "Up here!"

Casimir was by my side in an instant, the Leshy on his heel. Aleksei was in his human form, coughing heavily as he dragged himself up the stairs, his powerful frame slightly hunched. Still, when I let go of the doorhandle and Jem came staggering out, the man with the cudgel was able to subdue him with ease. Chest heaving, I stared at my murderous brother, still naked, lying unconscious on the floor.

Cas gently placed a hand on my shoulder.

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ancientevilvorsoason t1_j5ji7m1 wrote

Oh, good, the fucker is into his sister and decided to kill women. Lovely.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5jiv4g wrote

You didn't have to spell it out, I feel, like, really gross now.

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ancientevilvorsoason t1_j5jk0xb wrote

I am sorry. That was terrible of me. I completely forgot that he... is still your baby brother. Mmm, I think that you should make a mental list for next time you have dealings with Nick. You need an offswitch or control over anything and everything he gives you to use.

I am sorry about the miller.

Something however is bothering me. Why did Nick respond so negatively towards the miller helping you out. Considering he has had him for more than a decade and 0 interaction between you two, you are a threat to Nick. Please do some additional reading on control and manipulation of the supernatural variety. Are you friends with any of the white hats? Angels? Saints? Maybe poke a bit around, you need to be able to protect yourself against Nick.

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ouroboro76 t1_j5jl5fg wrote

I have the feeling that Fiona trying to protect herself from Nick may do more harm than good. I mean, he is concealing her land from the public and lending her a soul to take care of the bies, and he can undo the first one at any time if he so chooses. I'd say it's kinda necessary for Fiona to maintain a working business relationship with Nick (as unpalatable as that might be) because the alternative is worse.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5jz0yw wrote

It's okay, you don't have to apologize. Jeremy is a monster, pain and simple. He used to be different. He was a great kid. But that doesn't matter anymore.

Thank you.

I don't know if I'm acquainted with any angels or saints... I don't think so. Would be kinda cool tho. I'd sure like to be able to protect myself.

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ReaperofFish t1_j5ka6l7 wrote

My assumption is Nick is playing a game to get Fiona to bear the miller's children and carry on the line.

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sugarsuites t1_j5m16kb wrote

I mean… probably. Jacek needs to get his heart back though, I think 🤔

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SpunGoldBabyBlue t1_j5ntrnq wrote

Jem isn't 'into' his sister. He's stuck in the sphere of envy, remember? He's envied his sister all these years because of how their mother favored Fiona and showered her with love, affection, friendship, and attention. Plus she's the heiress of their home and forest.

Essentially those women represented Fiona which is why he killed them....killing Fiona over and over again. Which is why Jem said he'd dreamed of killing her when held the knife to her throat.

I can't wait for the installment. This is a fantastic read. Thanks GFTC!

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JollyTraveler t1_j5kp8qb wrote

Thanks I hate it 😩

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ancientevilvorsoason t1_j5kpkx4 wrote

However... something is bugging me. Nick got him killed because he was overdoing it that much? The fuck did Jem do?? It can't be JUST serial killer shit.

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JollyTraveler t1_j5ktzsn wrote

Totally agree with you there. I feel like Jeremy may have been leveraging powers that weren’t his to frivolously use on his own “revenge”.

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BellaAngelaDiTerra t1_j5nem3m wrote

And also, why is he in envy in particular if it was serial killing? Nick had so much hatred for the guy, it seems. You're right, there is prolly something more...

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Justice4All0912 t1_j6cf11t wrote

He's in envy because he's always been envious of Fiona and their mother's close relationship. All of his victims represented Fiona and/or possibly their mother. Also, 'overdoing it'? Are you serious? Killing forty-two innocent women is 'overdoing it'? You're actually sick.

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j5l95bt wrote

Guess that's why he was in Envy, maybe. Ugh. Fucking nasty.

Fiona, I hope you took a long hot shower. I know you probably felt like you needed one...

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JollyTraveler t1_j5jk0ap wrote

I don’t think Cas is a serial killer- my read on Jeremy’s comment was that they both turned to “distractions” that treat women as disposable.

There’s a liiiiiittle bit of a difference between indiscriminately seducing and sleeping with women regardless of impact or regard for them as people, and literal murder. Like how he was party to ruining the marriage of that girl Fiona went to high school with- yeah she made the decision too but, uh, the Novak family sure seems to have a level of allure that most humans don’t.

Anyway, Casimir’s seduction activities are a far cry from Jeremy’s serial killer activities, though both seem to be rooted in issues with women.

Fiona, this might be a hard conversation, but I think you need to talk to Cas about your childhoods. I know you love your mom deeply, but I get the feeling that you may have been treated very differently as the next heiress and steward of the family land.

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Evening-Difficulty17 t1_j5joztw wrote

Agree. I also think the death of the youngest scarred Gem in a different way. He probably felt his mother thought the boys were disposable because Mom already had her heiress.

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Writerhowell t1_j5n66b6 wrote

Though I don't actually envy Fiona having to look after that place. Sure, it's nice to have a house without a mortgage, but it seems to be more trouble than its worth.

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Evening-Difficulty17 t1_j5n6n5z wrote

I don't think I'd have lived long as the caretaker. An entity even thinking about eating my children and I'd have burned the forest down or died trying.

Maybe it's best if Fiona doesn't have children.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5k0ins wrote

Yeah, you're right. What also threw me off is how Jeremy seemed to think that Cas would just, you know, "get" him. I guess there is a conversation to be had. The thought of my mother being a problematic parent is admittedly hard to stomach, though. I always got a lot of attention and love from her, but I'm starting to think I might have been the only one of her kids who did. Christ, this is all so shitty.

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JollyTraveler t1_j5krsk7 wrote

And you just got your soul back too. Old Scratch there is tricky and opportunistic.

As far as your mom goes, it’s hard to just blame her for what’s happened. From what you’ve written it to does sound like she loved you all dearly. But in reality there are only so many hours in the day, and as your moms successor she needed to spend the time with you to teach you what that meant. Sadly that means less time for your siblings and as a kid that’s hard to reconcile. I can see Cas maybe wanting to avoid the topic, but if you asked him directly he might shed some light.

No matter what though, lots of us have shitty upbringings and somehow manage to not be serial killers. Jeremy made his choices and seems to have been deeply disturbed even before he moved out- at this point he has absolutely nothing to lose.

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Koevis t1_j5kzf84 wrote

Sounds like you were the golden child

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BellaAngelaDiTerra t1_j5nety7 wrote

Ah, wait a minute. This may be why he is in envy. Maybe because he is envious of all the love you were getting from your mom and why he is taking out his frustrations on other women? Hmmm...

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anaisgeorgoa t1_j5nld62 wrote

It seems like you may have been the golden child, and perhaps Jem could have been the scapegoat? I don’t know how your mother interacted with him, but it’s been said you were the favorite. It may fit the bill, but it kinda sorta doesn’t matter anymore. It was what it was. There’s no excuse for what/how Jem is. I’m sorry Fiona. This is all very hard.

When you’re going through hell, keep going!

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Tytticus t1_j5ke7gq wrote

>the Novak family sure seems to have a level of allure that most humans don’t.

That's a good point, and it makes me wonder if the Novaks have some fae ancestry. If some of their ancestors were on as friendly terms with the woodland inhabitants as Fiona is, that could well be the case.

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JollyTraveler t1_j5kslcg wrote

Between Casi-nova-mir and the sauna incident….well. 😏

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IAmNotDrDavis t1_j5kmvra wrote

I think it's pretty clear why Jem was in Envy. Looks like Nick is considering Cas for Lust.

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JaguarLong1936 t1_j5kog6g wrote

I kind of got the impression that he was infering Cas had similar feelings towards Fiona that he does...just not sure if its the resentment or the other really awful stuff.

I'm sure in his own way Cas might be a bit resentful but not for a moment do I think he would ever feel what Jeremy feels. He seems to genuinely love and want to protect her in a sibling way.

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JollyTraveler t1_j5ktg08 wrote

I agree that was the inference, but I think Jeremy is also just real fucked up and is incorrect about how Cas does feel. Still, hella problems with women though.

And yeah I think Cas has processed and recognized that whatever did happen was likely a failure in parenting and not with Fiona. Hell, it’s not like being the heiress is a walk in the park dream job. It’s hard work and can easily be deadly and requires essentially dedicating your life for the sake of the land.

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j5la8yt wrote

I think he was mixing up resentment for...whatever the hell he feels toward Fiona. Which might have resentment thrown in...but it's also a helluva lot darker than that. And because they grew up in a similar upbringing, he's assuming that Cas must have the same feelings he does.

It's sorta like how racists think everyone around them will agree with their racist, for a (somehow!) less extreme example...

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aeternum123 t1_j5jjv38 wrote

I’ve been reading since the first post. I really hope your plan works, and I hope the devil isn’t… to hard on you. He seemed pretty upset, like you stole his only love from him or something.

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lokisown t1_j5k15vp wrote

I would not want to see Jem's victims. I would be horrified to find that they all shared the same resemblance to a certain Heiress.

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ouroboro76 t1_j5jhmy5 wrote

I'm glad Jeremy managed to take care of any misgivings you had about using him as a conduit for an evil spirit.

But I'll admit I'm a bit concerned about the implication that your brother Cas is also a serial killer. You may wanna see if there's any way to address it before he ends up like Jem.

Edit: I’m being made aware of how many different ways there are to take Jeremy’s implication that Cas is just like him. I now understand that Jeremy wasn’t necessarily implying Casimir is a serial killer, so y’all can stop now.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5jhw8o wrote

I don't think that's what Jeremy was talking about. Sure, I'll talk to Cas about him again sooner or later but there's no reason for concern, I'm sure.

And yeah, Jem did make my decision rather easy in the end there, didn't he

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Tytticus t1_j5ju6vr wrote

I think he means Cas is also taking out his mother issues on women. Maybe in Jem's screwed up mind, he thinks they're both the same because they both hurt women because of how their mother treated them, as if there's no difference between being a serial killer and being a womanising asshole.

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bitch_is_cray_cray t1_j5jlnq4 wrote

I'm thinking he's either implying while Cas is just a "womaniser" at the moment, he is fighting/ignoring the urge to want to kill them OR Cas is also subconsciously into Fiona. Idk, I'm not smart nor great at reading in between the lines.

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AnyIndividual1961 t1_j5jlwyf wrote

Jem doesn't have a soul. It was stolen, and your soul may have been stolen, not just lost and wandering.

I'm very sorry for what you are going through. I hope things get better soon.

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bitch_is_cray_cray t1_j5jmmj0 wrote

Ooo i love this take, but would he have been able to go to Hell without a soul? or is that too philosophical or whatever

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chalaismyig t1_j5lg3j1 wrote

Well Fiona went to hell without a soul

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bitch_is_cray_cray t1_j5lonod wrote

i just meant more in the sense can the devil keep someone a prisoner if they don't have a soul (similar to stories where the devil gets upset because the person has sold or given their soul to someone else and thus the devil can't have their soul), but valid point!

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chalaismyig t1_j5lpsoe wrote

You had good points too! WE ALL HAVE GOOD POINTS! Let's all point at Fiona with blacked out eyes and jaws otherworldly wide until she posts again 😍🤗

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tinypurplepiggy t1_j5ntqbo wrote

It seems to me that their soul is what's being tormented in hell. Nick even said he would be taking Jem's soul back, they only have a corporeal form because Nick wills it. I suppose it is possible that he had his soul taken previously but if he did all that killing while his soul was missing, you would think he would be horrified by his own acts, not eager to play out his fantasy. It sounds more like he was corrupted at some point. Maybe the Bies has been around a lot longer than previously thought

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bitch_is_cray_cray t1_j5jmddo wrote

I know this is all about Jem but dang am I curious to see how this plays out with handling the woods and how you'll go with Jacek now that you have your soul back... Perhaps being detached helped you manage the woods and its entities more than you would think?

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spacetstacy t1_j5kc7d5 wrote

Right? Nick is such an asshat, giving Fiona her soul back when he did. She would have been much better off waiting until after the ritual.

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j5lakwj wrote

Yeah...that wasn't an accidental thing. That was a deliberate choice on his part, targeted to do the most damage to Fiona.

She really pissed him off when she got back in touch with Jacek again, and brought all the old feelings back to the surface...

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Tytticus t1_j5jui6q wrote

Well, I'll be looking forward to seeing this asshole being kicked back down to hell. I suppose the one good thing he did for you was make it easier to do what needs to be done now that you don't have to worry if your baby brother is still in there somewhere and can be saved.

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introverted-fae t1_j5k7dls wrote

Holy fucking shit, okay so a few things Nick is an absolute fucking prick, and I hate him

Jaceck needs to come back safely because oh my God

I'm happy you got your soul back but I'm so sorry you're going through....any of this

Can I bitch slap the hell out of Jem with a rusted nail infused bat?!

Aleksei is amazing, and even if currently ill still intimidating and terrifying, and I have the utmost respect for the leshy.

Last and certainly not least, are you ok? Do you need a hug? I feel like you need a hug. I'm so sorry Fiona, I hope this all gets sorted soon and life gets a bit better for you and your woods.💜🖤

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j5lbxym wrote

Aleksei is...well, let's just say his feelings for Fiona aren't...

Ugh. My brain wanted to say "brotherly." Ugh. I feel dirty now...

But yeah...Aleksei would literally kill for her. I think he'd be happy if Jacek never came back into the picture. Remember he said," I could love you, if your eyes weren't so lifeless," the first time they met. And now they've gotten to know each other better (in more ways than one!), and he's seen how deep her love of his woods goes.

The woods are him and he is the woods...which in turn means that as she loves the woods...well, she has a love for him too. And the woods...they love her in return, in their own way. Which...transfers to him, I think.

I dunno. But I think that's why, even in his weakened state, he was able to knock Jeremy's brains cold.

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finalina78 t1_j5m2l2u wrote

And her eyes are probably not so lifeless now when she has her soul back

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S4njay t1_j5jv4ao wrote

Excuse me WHAT? The true monsters are within your family, I gotta say...

Someday, I hope all this gets over and you can enjoy some forked-tongue kisses with Jacek.

A rather innocous question here, you went to school? How did that work in that frozen hellhole out there?

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5jybo9 wrote

Yeah. Hard to believe this is what my little brother turned into.

Hehe that's a nice thought, admittedly.

Well, there's a school in the town over where the ice rink is. A bit of a commute but yeah.

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TheBumblingBee1 t1_j5jz83h wrote

Ugh. I KNEW Nick was going to make you take Jem. Messed up sense of humor, that one.

I'm sorry Jem came at you like that. Creepy af.

I hope you are taking care of yourself after everything. Getting your soul back, losing Jacek, literally everything with Jem....

Best of luck, love.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j5k12s2 wrote

Yeah. He probably did think it was funny.

And fuck yeah, I'm still feeling super icky.

I'll try. I'm shaken but I can pull through. I'll sort this out, I'm sure I can do it. Thank you.

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PandaBennington t1_j5k73pg wrote

Why when he said Envy did I feel like it had something to do with you? And then the rest just quickly spelled itself out. Jesus hope he just has Cas pegged wrong because that's just too much.

I knew he was going to make you use Jem. Hope you guys can just hurry up and get this over with smoothly.

Though unfortunately it being you... I don't see that happening. Still rooting for you though! 🧡

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MotherofPuppos t1_j5jqire wrote

Yeesh…called it, but didn’t call it THAT much 🤯 Happy you’re not dead, Jem can eat shit.

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Michal_17 t1_j5knszq wrote

This was not a good day for Cas. Imagine being in his place, just chilling with a laptop when suddenly your sister teleports into the room accompanied by your (insane and bloody) brother who you have not seen for ages and by the Devil himself. And then the literal Devil says you look attractive.

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lauraD1309 t1_j5kc5r3 wrote

Wow! I feel rather foolish for kind of defending Jem. What a waste of space. I'm thinking Jem was saying that he and Cas had to live in your shadow. That you were put on a pedestal by your mother. Jem apparently did not appreciate that.... While Cas has real love for you. Brotherly love. Get the Beis in Jem quick and get him away from you.

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nothanks64 t1_j5jq57f wrote

Jem most definitely deserved that kick in the dick..... maybe he needs another one or two juuuuuuuust to keep him nice and unconscious..... Good luck with all that bullshit you've gotta deal with.

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andante528 t1_j5k7wfj wrote

I hope it hurt Jem 10x more to be kicked in the crotch in his temporary corporeal form. What a monstrous betrayal from a sibling.

After the ritual and other urgent matters, I hope you can find out exactly why he’s in Envy, even if the truth is painful. Maybe then Cas could still turn things around, possibly with therapy? Unless he wants to meet Nick again … obviously Nick is keen.

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Cool-Voice-118 t1_j5l0l8u wrote

Please do not blame yourself, your brother is not only sexual-sadist, but clearly psychotic, and yet an organized killer as well since he was never caught.

However, I hate to say this, but Fiona; someday, if and when you can handle it, you may want to ask Jacek what Jeremy's victims looked like. Some of the things he said to you.... I believe he picked victims that might have resembled you. Just theeay he talked. His hatred towards you is so visceral. I'm sorry. Both he and the Devil are having a great deal of "fun" and "enjoyment" at your pain and expense. If the Leshy is better, please take any advice he or the Bannik can give you. I still stand by my previous post the Devil is going to try and pull some shit to get you to end up serving him forever, and he knows your weaknesses.

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Bsmith1119 t1_j5jvxpn wrote

Andddd Jems a weirdo, noted

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MizzCroft t1_j5jzw7c wrote

Geez.. This is a hard tough situation. I'm so sorry for all this shit you have to go through constantly. I hope the ritual goes allright. I wish things had turned out differently. I know what it is to lose the love of your own brother like that but I cannot absolutely imagine what you're suffering through. My heart goes out to you. I sure hope the ritual goes all to plan.

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spacetstacy t1_j5kblvs wrote

Fuck!!! Jem is seriously fucked up! I don't think he's gonna be very cooperative. I hope your plan will still work.

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JaguarLong1936 t1_j5kq3bm wrote

Question. What if putting the Bies into Jem means he can't go back to hell. Because Nick specifically gave Jeremy a body...and his wording was just too...plain.

Is Jeremy really dead if he has a Bies in him, like he's still going to be corporeal so how will he go back to hell....

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Thr33Littl3Monk3ys t1_j5lcmt7 wrote

The Bies will take the place of Jeremy's soul within the body, it sounded like. So the body will remain, and Jeremy's soul will go back to hell.

Worst part (for him): he still won't actually be dead! (And he deserves that...)

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Petentro t1_j5l9hcq wrote

The plan is to trap the bies in the body and then kill it to deprive it of a functioning body

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kauma16 t1_j5l69x8 wrote

In a twisted way, I guess Cas & you won’t feel bad for using Jem as a conduit sacrifice

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UsualAlarmed1472 t1_j5mvfhy wrote

I wonder what Jacek felt when he knows that Jem has a thing for his sister. Is that why Jem is afraid of him? Hmm.

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B3xbury t1_j5l0m01 wrote

I am once again, screaming. That’s two days in a row now.

I like to think I work well under pressure but I’ve clearly got nothing on you!

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ttaaytaaay t1_j5lh97t wrote

Please do your best to keep yourself safe! This was horrifying to read, I can’t even begin to imagine what it must’ve been like being right there in the moment ;-;

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kimbabini t1_j5lzds4 wrote

With Jacek being .. uh.. "away".. are you able to wear normal clothes without pain? Unsure if I missed something or am just a big dumb dumb lol. Or very possibly, both. I am so curious tho I am sorry about this comment haha

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relliott15 t1_j5mtbi5 wrote

No, I think I recall him telling her he couldn’t remove the spell - that spells are tricky and he wouldn’t know how even if he wanted to. She replied that she’d gotten used to it.

At least that’s what I remember?

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kimbabini t1_j5n8vvs wrote

Ohhh okay okay thank you. Been really enjoying reading these. Am always excited for the next one lol

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relliott15 t1_j5nahm3 wrote

No worries! I was super curious about it so when it was mentioned, I just happened to make a mental note. And yes lol I am SO enjoying these!!

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yourexsbestie t1_j61mhpf wrote

I knew right away when he was in the envy sphere of hell that it was you who he envied I hate to say it but I am sure the women he murdered bore a striking resemblance to you Fiona dear Truly my heart aches for you I pray to the universe that everything ends well for you and your able to heal from all your past present and soon to come trauma

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DevilMan17dedZ t1_j5m73bd wrote

Fucking Hell. I'm gonna go out on a limb here, I think there's a distinct possibility that there is no way in Hell that things with Jem could be unpacked...? Even with eternity looming.. Damn, I'm happy Cas n' Aleksei were right there to help you. That scared the Fuck Outta me.. Can't imagine how Terrified you were. Keep Both Eyes Fixed on Jem at ALL Times..

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petiteasianbae t1_j5mbnri wrote

Holy shit. I didn’t expect that about Jem. What was he like before he left your family?!?

I don’t like what he said about Cas. I do think Cas is a much, much better person than Jem will ever be. But we need context on your younger brothers now…

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hauntedathiest t1_j5mc81q wrote

The devil is a trickster so he definitely has something up his sleeve. Why is Jacek so scared of getting involved with you.There is big reason begind all this and Jacek is doing the only thing he can to try and protect you.Good luck with all this I have a feeling you will need it.The leshy seems to be getting weaker and weaker like someone has done some dark magic on him.

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IndieMedley t1_j5mouxa wrote

Hm, I guess I can wager a hypothesis on why Jem was in Envy. He envied the relationship you had with your mom, envied being the heir, envied being loved. Cas compensated another way, a somewhat healthier way. Yet Jem, he didn’t have a support system, didn’t talk to you as often, so, he just got to stew in that hate. Maybe he’s not entirely irredeemable if the proper actions are taken. But, at this point, I doubt he’d want to change, nor would that even make things better. Just make saying goodbye harder when you sacrifice him

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sugarsuites t1_j5n3qeo wrote

I don’t like this, scoob!!!!!

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Writerhowell t1_j5n5u46 wrote

My knowledge of true crime is coming back to bite me in the butt with this. I can already guess enough of what Jeremy might've done, and why.

Poor Fiona. I'm so sorry you're having to go through this. But we're all still here for you, and you'll get Jacek back. I refuse to believe this will all end in tears.

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BlightResearch t1_j5n7d2v wrote

Your situation seems to continually be spiraling out of control...hmmm

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mamberdeville t1_j5nfmh5 wrote

I... just... hugs you seem like you could really use one. I hope things go alot smoother with your ritual and getting Jacek back♡

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pancetta9 t1_j5ok3v8 wrote

Damn I want to know everything that happened after immediately it is so intriguing, OP.

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danielleshorts t1_j5pxgng wrote

Don't know what happened to Jem, but he is seriously fucked up if the Devil himself put Hells prison. He's getting what he deserves.

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Nature_Dweller t1_j5rvjl8 wrote

What the hell happened to him? Rhetorical question.

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blazingbarbie_ t1_j5s7076 wrote

bro i actually hate jem w/ a passion and you can kindly dead him in pt21 thxxxx 🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩

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