Tell me what you think

Any criticism welcome This general idea is going to be a thesis of an essay I’m writing:

Society or humanity should be considered in an analogy as to a person. I hope that my view of humanity as a “young adult listening to jimmy hendricks, loaded walking down the street, back towards his humble abroad to swift away into slumber and be brazenly awoken the next morning to a seemingly endless hypocrical scenarios in which he requires of himself to act based on inherited notions, conciliatory and unconscious still unproven” is true because if so that means that boy loaded has dreams and intelligence and struggles and triumphs and growth and rapture and sex and money and the immediate need for both and agreement of worthlessness at the same time. It has a search for purpose for it role (career) and it continues everyday to try and configure an understanding of how to move forward. All the while attempting to grasp at the past while barely even acknowledging the Now. We are as us. This opens many windows in the understanding of Us, Me, We and what we and I and Us will be a part of.

Thx