Space reinvented

Submitted by MattQLFnda t3_112f6gd in springfieldMO

Hello,
We are a group of 3 students at MSU and as part of a creativity class we have to launch a product. After thinking about what motivates us, what we want to do with our lives, we came up with a product.

The idea is to accompany the cities to build parks and living spaces to mix all social classes in the cities.

If you are interested, have a look at our website to pre-order :
https://porzelmia.wixsite.com/space-reinvented

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pssssn t1_j8jxe98 wrote

This post hurts my head.

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Dbol504 t1_j8k34c7 wrote

Make sure you get someone to write your copy and edit it. Those run-ons and grammatical errors hurt my head.

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JuicyFruitsGroupie t1_j8mnbg7 wrote

“To mix all social classes…”

You mean like…parks that already exist and apartment buildings?

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Wendypeffy t1_j8jyq0p wrote

This is so weird. The website is not finished and has no legitimate information lol

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Wendypeffy t1_j8ks2tt wrote

So then what is the point of the post? There is no product and no reason for a website or link? The post almost seems like it was written by a bot.

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kernelpanic789 t1_j8jru0a wrote

Account created today... You're gonna have to try harder than that Feds. Also, I see you in your van outside my house too.

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Kalraken t1_j8mrih6 wrote

Why would anyone care about the opinion of three college students for city planning?

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QuarterInchSocket t1_j8mrhse wrote

"If you build it, they will come" is not always true.

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charitykase32 t1_j8oj8bv wrote

It looks like you're promoting more of a service than a product if we're being technical. When speaking about community development projects, I recommend using terms like low or moderate income areas. To enhance your project I would recommend researching opportunity zones.

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