Submitted by jesseqr t3_y6i0mh in springfieldMO
Maxwyfe t1_ispvl2k wrote
Reply to comment by jesseqr in History of the abandoned Indian Ridge Resort by jesseqr
I kind of agree with ShartsvilleDestroyer. The bad cop part felt kind of out of place. It maybe would have been a good follow up or extra episode for this one. It did detract from the larger story.
And I'm not defending a bad cop. I'm trying to give constructive criticism.
jesseqr OP t1_ispxdhd wrote
Yeah I can understand that. I put it in mainly to warn people in the area, but I also wanted to keep it short instead of telling the whole story for a few minutes and explain myself in the video. I don’t think it was crazy enough for a stand alone video.
Maxwyfe t1_ispxyyw wrote
I don't either, but maybe a follow up, like I said. Just maybe a little extra bit about how crazy the local cops are about enforcing the no trespassing signs in that area. If you do it right, it kind of lends more intrigue and conspiracy to the whole shady real estate development scam. Like this place is so messed up the crooked local cops will hassle the crap out of you if you just drive by.
jesseqr OP t1_istlvx0 wrote
That’s a good angle to look at it from. I might add some text to the video, but thanks for the help that’s definitely a good idea!
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