MarudePoufte t1_itoaxnk wrote on October 25, 2022 at 2:38 AM

That’s unfortunate about your roommates pets, but on the bright side you have an undeniable gift for the written word!

phizzlek t1_itouq3q wrote on October 25, 2022 at 5:46 AM

You’re telling me you didn’t cringe at “yeeted itself coherent to my vector”!?

positivethinker77 t1_itp1ror wrote on October 25, 2022 at 7:20 AM

I loved the yeet part!

Cthonos t1_itpriuw wrote on October 25, 2022 at 12:39 PM

Agreed, the whole post is overwritten

phizzlek t1_itpty7g wrote on October 25, 2022 at 12:59 PM

It has ‘school creative writing class’ vibes. People seem to love this on Reddit though so perhaps we’re out of touch!

Cthonos t1_itq0j48 wrote on October 25, 2022 at 1:49 PM

Think you've hit the nail on the head with that, maybe half of the posts I see on here make me cringe; they feel like they were written by edgy 14 year olds.

MarudePoufte t1_itouwcb wrote on October 25, 2022 at 5:49 AM

Haha sure, but I’m assuming that was for the young readers? Otherwise I thought it was great

mrmike5157 t1_itpn26x wrote on October 25, 2022 at 11:58 AM

Agreed, I’m still trying to chew up and swallow that unfortunate phrase. Otherwise an entertaining story. (;