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ExoticButters79 t1_j2f0ecr wrote

I think you you should.delete this and try again. I think you can be more creative, and tell us a more plausible story.

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NexFire7790 t1_j2f0p46 wrote

The setup for the characters is lacking. Im just not emotionally invested in them enough to care. Did you also write season 8 of GOT?

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Salt-Classroom-9058 OP t1_j2f2b3e wrote

Unfortunately I'm a very boring guy. Next time I sexually assault someone I'll be sure to include my sad backstory, just for you.

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NexFire7790 t1_j2f2l0b wrote

Much appreciated. It always helps to take more time to develop the characters even if it makes the story longer.

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Foumerpheck t1_j2f0jth wrote

You need to be locked up

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Farttohh t1_j2ezoi1 wrote

Accidentally huh, that's what they always say.

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Jesse0100 t1_j2f1nxe wrote

You just told a few million people. Post an update after your trial.

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Salt-Classroom-9058 OP t1_j2f2g2b wrote

Legally speaking, I don't think there's ever been a case where a post from r/tifu has been used as evidence.

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Jesse0100 t1_j2f6u7u wrote

The cops monitor social media constantly and use posts as evidence all the time.

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rosiofden t1_j2f2bhv wrote

Aaand this is your first post? Ok.

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Salt-Classroom-9058 OP t1_j2f2jez wrote

This sort of post isn't the type of thing you post from your main account.

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HarryHacker42 t1_j2fuhro wrote

I would have guessed Andrew Tate but he's in jail.

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fizzypaints t1_j2fuqus wrote

if this is real... i hope you go to jail. that poor girl

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Vast_Reflection t1_j2fnl3e wrote

I mean. If this is true, never do this to your girlfriend again, or anyone else. Like the thought process of bringing someone to your car like that . . .

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NOT000 t1_j2f69bj wrote

could be used in a comedy film

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Mediocre-Tomato- t1_j2fqwzw wrote

See what happens when you use your penis instead of your brain?

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MotoHULK t1_j2f6ewi wrote

Kevin Spacey, is that you?

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WhitePlatano t1_j2fwu6y wrote

The boys are gonna have fun with you when the lights go off in that cell.

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