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RedditStrolls t1_j8qdudv wrote

Let me check my email archives. But I'd love to caveat this by saying I write for a living and it's usually a lot better than what I'm about to share

Edit, my Lytton entry:

Warm, moist, pleased, Amaryllis snuggled further into the reaches of her bedding, spreading her legs uninhibitedly—muscle memory from when she used to welcome her lovers—she added her hands to the movement and the wetness woke her.

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gregorydgraham t1_j8rldhz wrote

The problem here is that Amaryllis actually sounds like an interesting character. Terrible name though, nice work :)

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RedditStrolls t1_j8t3eo4 wrote

I shudder to think that it came out of me since I hate that m word so much. Amaryllis is truly not a cool name. It's the worst I could think of at the time.

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RedditStrolls t1_j8t3e3x wrote

I shudder to think that it came out of me since I hate that m word so much. Amaryllis is truly not a cool name. It's the worst I could think of at the time.

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