A_GOOD_NINJA

A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j61z46t wrote

Reply to comment by Much_History_8800 in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

Thank you for writing! I could see a lot of vivid imagery in your words.

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5za2cu wrote

Reply to comment by SilasCrane in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

This is awesome! I hope it get voted higher so more people can read it. Thank you for writing!

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5z1hsq wrote

Reply to comment by Skyblade12 in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

This is close to what I was thinking when I wrote the prompt. I love it! Thank you.

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5z198k wrote

Reply to comment by SilverSneakers in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

That was an exciting read. Like a lot happened, in a short time. Thank you!

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5z1171 wrote

Reply to comment by Deathpaloma in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

I like that we never know where he went, just the effect on him. Thank you!

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5y8umh wrote

Reply to comment by GrunkleStanwhich in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

I like the ending! I don’t know exactly what it means, but I like it. Thank you!

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5y8odb wrote

Reply to comment by armageddon_20xx in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

This is a beautiful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing it!

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A_GOOD_NINJA OP t1_j5y8jra wrote

Reply to comment by Mooses_little_sister in [WP] Your superpower isn’t anything special. You can make stuff disappear behind your back then pull it back out again. When a friend at a party asks you to do it to them it sounds like a great laugh. But when you pull them back out they look older, disheveled, and are frantic to be sent back. by A_GOOD_NINJA

This is great! It’s a real twist on where I thought it could go. Thanks for writing!

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