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Accomplished_Web1549 t1_j9szf1o wrote

Halfway isn't bad, don't think I made it even a quarter the way through this, and it isn't that long. I thought from the hype this was going to be something special, but never got pulled into the story and the prose wasn't good enough to keep the pages turning, quite a rare DNF for me. I don't think the second person narrative was the problem, it can work in the right context.

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Accomplished_Web1549 t1_j6m8axh wrote

That's good news, I read this only last year and hadn't realised there'd been such a long wait for a sequel. At 14 years that surpasses the wait for The Winds of Winter, though I'm sure George will still manage to outdo that in the end.

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Accomplished_Web1549 t1_ixpnt9h wrote

The difference in tone also works in-universe, and with the framing device of the stories only being translated by Tolkien (from the Red Book of Westmarch). The Hobbit is Bilbo's story, written down half a century after the events, a period of time in which he has probably bored the whole of the Shire retelling the tale of his adventure, so the willing audience becomes those who haven't heard it yet, young children. The Lord of the Rings is Frodo's story, an account of struggle and war written in the immediate aftermath of the events by someone with PTSD.

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