ArcherOk6427 t1_iy98oxe wrote on November 29, 2022 at 6:25 PM Reply to comment by F1600A in [WP] You're a 'comically incompetent' supervillain for a group of C-List heroes. They are no real threat to you, so you endure their childish speeches. However, when the heroes raid the civilian business you run on the side and injure your employees, you decide to take yourself seriously for once. by Informal_Ad_6157 Love the story. Only comment would be maybe incorporating how she was sipping the drink with broken hands and and take out/adjust her opening the envelope at the end. Permalink Parent 5
ArcherOk6427 t1_iy98oxe wrote
Reply to comment by F1600A in [WP] You're a 'comically incompetent' supervillain for a group of C-List heroes. They are no real threat to you, so you endure their childish speeches. However, when the heroes raid the civilian business you run on the side and injure your employees, you decide to take yourself seriously for once. by Informal_Ad_6157
Love the story. Only comment would be maybe incorporating how she was sipping the drink with broken hands and and take out/adjust her opening the envelope at the end.