Not sure what the downvotes are for, this is awesome! Thanks for explaining the cause of the red tint on the moon, that’s the exact question I was going to ask.

I like that a lot! Great job, I really love how you ended the prompt!

You’re absolutely welcome! Thanks for taking the critique :)

I like the direction! Thanks for taking my prompt.

If you don’t mind some advice; details are important, but something I’ve noticed my favorite authors do is know when to let someone “read-between-the-lines” and not be too detailed on some things. For example, instead of something as unnaturally as saying “a 1km radius”, maybe instead indicate to the reader something obviously catastrophic will happen as indicated by the scientist‘s response. Let the reader imagine a bit.

For someone as volatile as Atom, I’d imagine more caution from those interacting with them. Waking up in a situation like this is unimaginable. For how catastrophic my reaction can be, I don’t believe a scientist would be as careless to tempt triggering me immediately after an event or to tell me this pain will last forever.

Someone wakes up with no memory. They’re permanently inflicted with the worst pain imaginable, but also later realize they are immortal.