BlightFantasy3467
BlightFantasy3467 t1_je8omin wrote
Reply to comment by illessen in You will never see your death certificate by v3xpunk
And time of death as well,
Maybe a cause of death, if death certificates have one.
BlightFantasy3467 t1_je2qoaf wrote
Reply to comment by fuqdisshite in Little Johnny's parents wanted to have some "alone time" together... by SexySwedishSpy
Here's a better one
BlightFantasy3467 t1_jduanu5 wrote
Reply to comment by wotmate in Golf carts are sports cars by exbingoz
Then there's the entire world of e-sports
BlightFantasy3467 t1_japi7uh wrote
Reply to comment by re_nonsequiturs in [WP] You are a werewolf trying your best to live peacefully among humans, but your SO has just proposed to you with a ring of pure silver. You genuinely love and want to marry them, but you also have to somehow get out of accepting this ring. by Kitty_Fuchs
That's too NSFW for me, censor your goddamned hand holdings!
BlightFantasy3467 t1_j6vgzdp wrote
Reply to comment by Musicarna in [WP] As a demon, you can't believe that you must concede defeat and offer a return on a person's soul. You tried to find every way to meet the transaction terms but could not. And it sounded like such easy thing too! "A soul in exchange for help with Comcast Customer Support" by trying2Bsocial
Just call in LetMeSoloHer
BlightFantasy3467 OP t1_j65j285 wrote
Reply to comment by RefreshingWorld in [WP] You were a Superhero, but came to realise that you can't change the world for the better by following the laws and morality. You will make the world a better place, by Any. Means. Necessary. by BlightFantasy3467
Fantastic, loved the way you used Flowery language.
BlightFantasy3467 t1_j4sjwiq wrote
Reply to comment by VocalMagic in [WP] You are a supervillain who went undercover as a superhero for jokes, only to discover how corrupt the system is in the hero society. The system is so corrupt that you agree to lead a small group of superheroes to rebel against the unjust hero society. by RavenousOwlhead
Eh, he'll come back, again and again.
BlightFantasy3467 OP t1_ixsaz2v wrote
Reply to comment by rulethem in [WP] You are the Big Bad, you've been purposefully sending weaker minions to the Hero and their party, in order to strengthen them for the final confrontation. All you seek, is a worthy death. by BlightFantasy3467
Pretty good,
Just one gripe that I have.
Stop using contractions in your more powerful moments. It takes away from their Importance.
For example "...for I'm your worst mistake."
Does not have the emphasis of the character, such that
"...for I am your worst mistake." would.
Using contractions makes your authoritive characters seem weaker, less important, more casual.
It's fine if say, your character was some average teenager or something. E.g. "Don't tell me what to do!" Sounds like they're throwing a tantrum.
But if a king were to say it, their words would be less threatening. Instead they would say "Do not tell me what to do!" It gives their words a power to it, a weight to their words.
Also, say you were doing an essay, and it had a minimum word limit, not using contractions can pad out your word count.
BlightFantasy3467 t1_iucss1x wrote
Reply to comment by Godlike_Mentality in You live rent free in somebody's mind by beakycorvid
I meant nobody as in it's someone's name.
BlightFantasy3467 t1_iuco1fy wrote
Reply to comment by Godlike_Mentality in You live rent free in somebody's mind by beakycorvid
Damn, Nobody really be thinking 'bout you that much, 'ey.
BlightFantasy3467 t1_jeecjlm wrote
Reply to Hang man is a pretty disturbing kid’s game considering it’s about a man getting executed if your diction isn’t good enough by Looney_forner
It's also pretty cruel, since the victim is obviously already dead by the time the head apears, we're just piecing the corpse back up on the gallows