I am, but not in a good way. The perspective is all over the place. The tears drop down onto the umbrella but the man in the umbrella is in front of the intersection.
The woman is behind the intersection. There is no way the tears should be falling from her face onto the umbrella.
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I am, but not in a good way. The perspective is all over the place. The tears drop down onto the umbrella but the man in the umbrella is in front of the intersection.
The woman is behind the intersection. There is no way the tears should be falling from her face onto the umbrella.