DominusEstSatietatis t1_j0piur3 wrote on December 18, 2022 at 1:28 PM Reply to comment by ApprehensivePen in [WP] You are a warlock who has formed a pact with a powerful demon. The times that you summon your demon are the only solace they receive from a long and brutal war that rages within their home plane. by lordhelmos This is absolutely amazing. It hooks the reader quite early, and although I can tell what the ending is, the emotional payoff is great. I hope to write like this one day. Permalink Parent 243
DominusEstSatietatis t1_j0piur3 wrote
Reply to comment by ApprehensivePen in [WP] You are a warlock who has formed a pact with a powerful demon. The times that you summon your demon are the only solace they receive from a long and brutal war that rages within their home plane. by lordhelmos
This is absolutely amazing. It hooks the reader quite early, and although I can tell what the ending is, the emotional payoff is great. I hope to write like this one day.