Erokhar

Erokhar OP t1_iwutkc4 wrote

I like how you solved the genetic part of it by making it a simple vasectomy, then again I would have loved to read about how the hero struggled with his desire to have a family but he himself can't go around making supes like a vending machine. Or even the grandfather paradox by him being the progenitor of super humans. Overall, I like your take on it !

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