FridaysMan
FridaysMan t1_iy2k8rs wrote
Reply to I strongly dislike “smutty” books by [deleted]
I share the opinion, but I know why. It's because they're boring, and I'm not able to put myself into the story in the same way as other writers. Most "smut" isn't particularly well written, and tends to only work if it's your type of sex.
A lot of books have sex scenes in them, and most feel pointless if they don't advance the story or characters in any way, and tend to be all physical actions or emotional descriptions.
Few sex scenes have been done well, though I enjoyed Joe Abercrombie's sex scenes for how they were written. Red Country has a fantastic scene involving getting drunk, having sex, and then the hangover. The prose slowly breaks down into poorly punctuated verbal streams to give a near perfect written "drunk" feeling, then turns into all sharp short, painful punctuation for the hangover.
I strongly disliked the erotica in the Grey Bastards series though, it felt like it came out of nowhere and offered nothing I wanted to read. I especially didn't want a half orc gang leader to be taught how to squirt by a gigolo slave boy.
Some people like that kind of thing though.
FridaysMan t1_itlqsqp wrote
Reply to comment by That-Requirement-285 in "All Spaniards, we discovered, knew two English expressions. One was ‘OK, baby,’ the other was a word used by the Barcelona whores in their dealings with English sailors, and I am afraid the compositors would not print it." by SlitchBap
That's why you offer to pay them for a nude modelling session first.
FridaysMan t1_j1cd71u wrote
Reply to Understanding Abercrombie's character hype by Aplakka
Just one bit here, Sand Dan Glokta is the father. Savine is the daughter in the Age of Madness trilogy.
The characters in the third trilogy are really much better. For me the first law is a great story, but not great writing initially. I love how there are so many reluctant or incompetent leaders, and everyone just feels human with understandable self deception and flaws. The nice people turn out to be assholes in a lot of cases, and the assholes turn out to have really kind moments as well.
I disagree on the tropes though, Abercrombie is quite a master of taking a very standard trope and then subverting it. He uses them repeatedly.