Thank you!! I always try to use some references even for the more unnatural features. For this drawing it meant looking into medical eye conditions.The mouth hopefully keeps on bothering you in the small hours of the night

Many thanks, your comment really brightened my day :) It's definitely difficult to pick up the potentially useful criticism when the tone is unkind -but that's to be expected when sharing on reddit

Thank you. Perspective is definitely something that needs work, I agree.

Well, don't leave me guessing. How would you improve it?

Thank you!

The final girl is the one who gets the revenge arc. The penultimate girl is the one who suffers the most