ImpracticalPoet
ImpracticalPoet t1_j52p1a6 wrote
Reply to [WP] You can't understand for the life of you why your family isn't approving of your choice of spouse. Just because they're a cosmic, madness-inducing eldritch entity doesn't mean they'd make an unsuitable partner. by Seabass9975
[Poem]
Open my eyes, the void awaits Open the soul, my love awakes Bound by fate, Bound by joys,
Pierce the veil, Between these lands, And in the dining room,
Silence. A fork clatters against the hard floor.
This was my first go at writing a poem, please give some critiques.
ImpracticalPoet t1_j52smsm wrote
Reply to [WP] “Regrettably, your grip on reality is too strong to accept in this society. I hereby sentence you indefinitely to the Sane Asylum until you are purged of this malady.” by Seabass9975
[Poem]
Abandoned by the world,
My life soon unfurled,
The diagnosis arrived...
Crippling sanity, and a touch of apathy.
Left with little,
In a small sanitarium.
Monotony multiplies in my morose mind,
The ceiling is textured,
A strange pattern indeed.
This page is my sole solace.