IndieBenji

IndieBenji OP t1_j6gdsh9 wrote

> You’re not really supposed to.

Maybe. Maybe not.

> No there weren’t.

How is the protagonist claiming to have ESP in the third act pushing the story forward? What does the protagonist brother-in-law do to make enough money to own a castle and golf course? How on Earth does the astronomy-informed brother-in-law not know about Melancholia’s “death dance”? How did the bride break the news to the groom, resulting in their breakup?

These are a few issues I’m having. If you can answer these that’d be great

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