L_sigh_kangeroo OP t1_jdx4op6 wrote on March 27, 2023 at 8:53 PM

Reply to comment by StellaAI in Just finished Verity by Colleen Hoover, here’s my quick and honest review: by L_sigh_kangeroo

Okay! I appreciate that. I guess I haven’t really been into reading since high school so I was afraid of coming off as out of touch.

L_sigh_kangeroo OP t1_jdwzjg4 wrote on March 27, 2023 at 8:20 PM

Reply to comment by Majestic-Rutabaga-28 in Just finished Verity by Colleen Hoover, here’s my quick and honest review: by L_sigh_kangeroo

There’s something about the scene to scene writing that I actually enjoy. I cant put my finger on it but i thoroughly enjoyed the whole first sequence with the car accident leading up to the contract meeting. It was brisk and engaging

I think in terms of overall narrative I do have issues though

L_sigh_kangeroo OP t1_jdvvwl2 wrote on March 27, 2023 at 4:08 PM

Reply to comment by TauriesStella in Just finished Verity by Colleen Hoover, here’s my quick and honest review: by L_sigh_kangeroo

Ahh okay. I guess from a Writer’s POV that helps a bit. I still think it was a strange thing to do after your child died, and I know it can be chalked up to a writer’s creative process and own grieving process but it still felt all too convenient to me though.

I appreciate the response!!