MikeColorado
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Reply to comment by EvilNoobHacker in [WP] The knight who saved the princess was a 40 year old man with a wife and kids. He doesn't want her hand he just thinks teenage girls shouldn't be held captive in towers in the middle of nowhere. by Gregamonster
Finally an honest answer at the end. Made me laugh.
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Reply to comment by Omnizoom in [WP] As it turns out, this dragon had never killed anyone before, nor did it plan to, it was frightened and acted in self-defence. Now the party will have to figure out what to do with the hyperventilating beast while the cleric revives the murderhobo fighter by Zagreus7777
Go ahead take my upvote. Well done, did not see that coming.
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Reply to comment by N0V-A42 in [WP] An Alien interrogator delves into a human mind to find out it’s secrets, and finds a large rusty locked door. The subconscious guards the door but doesn’t stop the interrogator from opening it. by The-Cannibal-Hermit
Remember the gatekeeper's comment, I am not here to prevent you from going in, I am here to prevent things from coming out! Well done, engaging story.
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Reply to TIFU: Said something hateful to my husband by [deleted]
As a dad, I can tell you how I would be, so this is from my viewpoint, not trying to hurt, you, but want to be truthful. If he loves your child, and deeply loves you as well, his heart is broke, his confidence and trust in doing his best is now in question, he may pull away from you to protect his heart. Is he 100% right, no, but the hurt is there and will take time to rebuild. Communication will be the key, and both of you will have to work on it. Please approach him and let him know you want to rebuild and it will take time. He will learn to trust in you again, he will learn to confide in you again, and he will learn how to help out so you feel it as well. As tough as men try to be, in reality we have a most fragile heart. Also know he 100% wants your relationship back the way it was. My middle son gave me a father's day card that brought me to tears. Inside he had written, "When I was young I wanted you around more. Now that I am on my own, I realize that you were sacrificing so we did not have to."
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Reply to comment by m-s-c-s in [WP] The dragon spoke, "Release my human, and we will leave you all in peace. Do not, and I will reduce your walls to rubble to rescue them myself." by quazerflame
You know when it is that long and you don't even realize it, because the flow is so smooth. Well written, nice pacing, if this was a short story or a book, I am certain the only way I would put it down was when I reached the end.
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Reply to comment by Jamaican_Dynamite in [WP] You're a renowned portrait artist, painting portraits for politicians, celebrities, you name it. Late one night, there's a knock on your door. A nervous young man stands outside, pale, with elongated canine teeth. He'd like a portrait. Hasn't seen his own face in over a century. by iceariina
I believe at one point in the vampire sagas it was explained that the reason they could not see themselves in the mirror had to do with mirrors being lined with silver to provide the reflective surface. It would stand to reason that modern mirrors would not pose such a problem.
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Reply to comment by Crystal1501 in [WP] A mighty superhero was used as a scapegoat and imprisoned in a jail meant for supers. Realising the accusations are false it's their nemesis, a powerful super villain, who decides to spring them out. by Shadrak_Meduson
My gosh, I felt the fear, I felt the relief, the end almost brought me to tears. Thank you, wonderfully done.
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Reply to comment by chilldude890 in [WP] You are secretly a powerful villain who mainly uses their powers to play pranks on heroes, your son who's only been a villain for a year has just been killed by a team of teen heroes, Everyone isn't too concerned about what you'll do except for your nemesis who fully knows what your capable of by britishgamer215
Didn't realize who would pay the "Cost" of the prank until the last paragraph. Well done!!!
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Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP] The master detective just finished their long monologue laying out all the circumstantial evidence that reveals you as the murderer. Instead of confessing or attempting the kill the detective, you smile. You've got the best defence lawyer in the business and none of this will stand up in court. by NerdforceHeroes
Love the twist, in that he was actually innocent. Good Job.
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Reply to comment by gaborrero in [WP] As a young wizard you uncovered an old spell that resurrects one of your eldest ancestor. You do so in curiosity, only to face one of the most feared creature the world ever experienced thousands of years ago. The creature recognizes you as its descendant while you stare at it in disbelief. by Noxxi_Greenrose
Last sentence was great. "Child of mine" What an opening for a part 2.
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Reply to comment by Lunetheart in [WP] You know one of your family members has been replaced by a lookalike. Your other family members even seem to ignore the inconsistencies in the fake’s behaviour. Fed up with the lies, you decide to confront the fraud when you have a moment alone. by Seabass9975
Gotta quit reading stuff like this when I am cutting onions. Hit straight into the heart. Amazing writing.
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Reply to comment by Tomato_potato_ in [WP] An agoraphobic princess is a extremely sick and tired of all knights who are breaking into her castle and trying to slay her emotional support dragon. by Prompt_Dude
Wow good writing, I actually felt anxious reading it, your description of the princess' feelings was excellent.