RoboJoe9000 OP t1_jebdrma wrote on March 30, 2023 at 7:55 PM

It helps to get creative too. For example rubber chickens' heads can be removed and attached to an air filled balloon. I call them scream grenades and depending on the brand it can make a very scream like sound or sometimes closer to an air raid siren. Then twist the baloon and kink it into a door frame. Repeat as desired. As soon as the door opens the tortured screams of the souls burning in hell are released all at once. XD

RoboJoe9000 t1_jaa7l5r wrote on February 27, 2023 at 11:41 PM

Reply to comment by SCP_radiantpoison in [WP] You and your spouse like to play "Assassin", where you pretend to kill each other in different ways the other person isn't expecting. You just got a package in the mail, with a card that says "Bomb. You are dead." by reallygoodbee

Me too! Reminds me of when I used to ambush my roommate with nerf guns. Even worked out a few booby traps. I could definitely see myself doing something like the story above. XD

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_ivlbxeq wrote on November 8, 2022 at 8:21 PM

Reply to comment by wispshadow in [WP] "It's aware wolf!" "a warewolf?! Where?!" "No aware -- wolf! The wolf that is clairvoyant" by RoboJoe9000

Neat. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_ivdfyil wrote on November 7, 2022 at 3:39 AM

Reply to comment by futurelateral in [WP] "It's aware wolf!" "a warewolf?! Where?!" "No aware -- wolf! The wolf that is clairvoyant" by RoboJoe9000

:D this was a fun story. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_ivdcfbs wrote on November 7, 2022 at 3:09 AM

Reply to comment by Robysto7 in [WP] "It's aware wolf!" "a warewolf?! Where?!" "No aware -- wolf! The wolf that is clairvoyant" by RoboJoe9000

Nice. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 t1_iv7fs5e wrote on November 5, 2022 at 9:59 PM

Reply to comment by dr4gonbl4z3r in [WP] "You fool!" cackled the Dark One, "No man can kill me!" "But I am no man!" bellowed the hero, as he unhinged his jaw. A grotesque sound filled the hall as they hacked up impossibly large balls of cloth. Unfurling, they stand and announce "For we are actually three trench coats in a halfling!" by Breadinator

"I don't need sleep I need answers!" XD

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iuge3qj wrote on October 31, 2022 at 2:55 AM

Reply to comment by re_nonsequiturs in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

Thank you. I was wondering if I'd put it wrong but I've never seen it on paper only in speech.

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iufpf3g wrote on October 30, 2022 at 11:42 PM

Reply to comment by Cringehipster in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

I'm sure you will with that attitude! I see plenty of potential in your writing. :) If I took my non-expert non-writer guess I think adding more descriptive words or more personality to the text might have helped. Something to give more of a feel for the characters personalities or emotions and/or more details about the scene or what's going on around them or some kind of context to things about where and why they are, if that makes sense. If I took a guess I think the missing piece is somewhere in those details, but I couldn't say with any confidence.

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iufeie7 wrote on October 30, 2022 at 10:23 PM

Reply to comment by versenwald3 in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

I'm glad to hear that! :) I love seeing what people do with my prompts. I liked the way yours was set up and written

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iufb5tj wrote on October 30, 2022 at 9:59 PM

Reply to comment by Kwakigra in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

Well written. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iufaknv wrote on October 30, 2022 at 9:55 PM

Reply to comment by versenwald3 in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

I like it. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iuf5dcp wrote on October 30, 2022 at 9:20 PM

Reply to comment by HSerrata in [WP] Halloween is the one time of year most monsters can pass in the human world without hiding. Tired of waiting all year they've banned together to create a town that celebrates Halloween all year round. by RoboJoe9000

Neat! Thanks for writing! :) I find it difficult to imagine being able to focus long enough to write a story every day, but suppose that's why I write prompts instead of stories in response to them.

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iuf43ei wrote on October 30, 2022 at 9:11 PM

Reply to comment by Cringehipster in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000

It feels like it's missing something, but I like it. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iuei7ki wrote on October 30, 2022 at 6:46 PM

Reply to comment by Crystal1501 in [WP] Halloween is the one time of year most monsters can pass in the human world without hiding. Tired of waiting all year they've banned together to create a town that celebrates Halloween all year round. by RoboJoe9000

Well written and interesting. Thanks for writing! :)

RoboJoe9000 OP t1_iue2y20 wrote on October 30, 2022 at 5:06 PM

Reply to comment by MickeyG42 in [WP] Halloween is the one time of year most monsters can pass in the human world without hiding. Tired of waiting all year they've banned together to create a town that celebrates Halloween all year round. by RoboJoe9000

I thought that was about Halloween taking over Christmas or something.