Roxith OP t1_jdlbb0p wrote on March 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM Reply to comment by WhiteNight2505 in [WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. by Roxith Nice story! Your characters have a lot of personality. Their conversations were very smooth between them. It wasn’t awkward but flowed naturally. Permalink Parent 4
[WP] Once chosen by a creature, a person may harness its power. Your family has always had a connection to dragons but on the coming of age ceremony, the dragons turn away from you. Instead, a lone phoenix flies to your side. Submitted by Roxith t3_121ajmk on March 25, 2023 at 4:27 AM in WritingPrompts 18 comments 91
Roxith OP t1_jdkm7e1 wrote on March 25, 2023 at 1:57 AM Reply to comment by Shalidar13 in [WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. by Roxith Beautiful story. I loved how you set the stage and described her appearance. :) Permalink Parent 42
[WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. Submitted by Roxith t3_120xauq on March 24, 2023 at 8:26 PM in WritingPrompts 25 comments 359
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Reply to comment by WhiteNight2505 in [WP] Time stops as a girl with red eyes walks past crowds of people, stabbing one man before giving another person the knife. She starts walking away until you sneeze. by Roxith
Nice story! Your characters have a lot of personality. Their conversations were very smooth between them. It wasn’t awkward but flowed naturally.