Cool infographic! If I were you I’d definitely avoid using old-style figures alongside capital letters. The capital M in the second paragraph sticks out like a sore thumb and honestly I can’t unsee it. You could use a small cap M to make it more comfortable to the eye.
Also that whole paragraph just repeats information that is already clearly conveyed in the graph and it feels redundant. It would be more useful to use that space to make the graph bigger or replace that text with something that tells us information that we already don’t know by looking at the graph.
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Cool infographic! If I were you I’d definitely avoid using old-style figures alongside capital letters. The capital M in the second paragraph sticks out like a sore thumb and honestly I can’t unsee it. You could use a small cap M to make it more comfortable to the eye.
Also that whole paragraph just repeats information that is already clearly conveyed in the graph and it feels redundant. It would be more useful to use that space to make the graph bigger or replace that text with something that tells us information that we already don’t know by looking at the graph.