bloodredyouth t1_iw0gw7m wrote on November 11, 2022 at 11:54 PM Reply to The Seven Husbands of Eveling Hugo: I don’t get the hype by Hi-isLiv I like the premise of the story but i found the writing very poor and all the characters lacked depth. The dialogue was also trash. I felt like a 6th grader wrote it. Permalink 1
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Reply to The Seven Husbands of Eveling Hugo: I don’t get the hype by Hi-isLiv
I like the premise of the story but i found the writing very poor and all the characters lacked depth. The dialogue was also trash. I felt like a 6th grader wrote it.