littlewren11 t1_j1u39lb wrote on December 27, 2022 at 11:58 AM Reply to comment by Memphit in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs Oooh the dialogue in this piece flows really well! Good work! Permalink Parent 2
littlewren11 t1_j1u39lb wrote
Reply to comment by Memphit in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
Oooh the dialogue in this piece flows really well! Good work!