I really liked the "whirlwind of insanity masquerading as a horse" line. That whole paragraph. The concept of recurring dream. The father's advice which is vaguely fitting for horse riding, but which in the context of the prompt gets a new, more sinister meaning.
It really hooked me. I stopped to re-read it a few times and thought "wow, it's going to be good". And I was not disappointed :) Well done!
m3ntos1992 t1_j72h6w8 wrote
Reply to comment by Heavenfall in [WP] Before its death, the ancient dragon imparted you the knowledge of dragon magic, which was a true honor to receive, but now every dragon hunter arounds think you're just another disguised dragon. Turns out they can smell dragon magic, not dragons themselves. by Red580
Very nice!
I really liked the "whirlwind of insanity masquerading as a horse" line. That whole paragraph. The concept of recurring dream. The father's advice which is vaguely fitting for horse riding, but which in the context of the prompt gets a new, more sinister meaning.
It really hooked me. I stopped to re-read it a few times and thought "wow, it's going to be good". And I was not disappointed :) Well done!