I will argue that animating this data made it significantly more difficult to read. On top of that, it loops. Playfair is churning in his grave with every frame.

It’s “Market Share”, it’s not plural.

Also, if you’re going to do categorical colors on the donut, why not carry the colors to through to the bars? It helps the eye and brain correlate.

I can’t see the data because it’s behind a login, but it is strange there’s just this “other” huge category, but I understand sometimes there isn’t a standalone corporation/company to come anywhere close to the rest of the sample. Maybe a footnote as succinct as possible explaining why the “Other” is so big could help someone looking over this graphic.

Two things:

1. Why is this animated? I don’t see that adding any value.

2. Why does every x-axis label call the data out as 2022? You already did that in the title.

A few items:

1. Why have two decimal places on your y-axis? No tick mark on the scale actually uses a decimal place.

2. Why are there only data callouts in an oddball handful of categories? I say do them all or not at all unless you were making specific notes on those callouts.

3. Why are the data callouts two decimal places? None of those datapoints have more than one decimal place.

4. As others have mentioned, the color contrast is just not good. Google for color theory on charts. You can find online tools to suggest colors based on how many categories you are trying to highlight. At a minimum for this case pick two contrasting colors.

EDIT: a couple more items.

5. The border is distracting. It serves no purpose unless this chart was being dropped into a paper or presentation. Even then, I’m doubtful it’s helpful.

6. The punctuation on the title doesn’t seem to have much reason.