shleyal19 OP t1_j6b3rls wrote on January 29, 2023 at 1:42 AM Reply to comment by Dontdecahedron in [WP] A scholarly wizard, taught in a prestigious magic university, is both appalled and amazed at a self-taught sorcerer’s methods of practicing magic. The sorcerer, in turn, is amazed and confused by the wizard’s magical expertise and knowledge. by shleyal19 Both characters have a personality radiating off the text, so I think you did well. Also glad you didn’t use humans as the main characters. Permalink Parent 10
shleyal19 OP t1_j6b3kcm wrote on January 29, 2023 at 1:40 AM Reply to comment by SarcasticTrooper in [WP] A scholarly wizard, taught in a prestigious magic university, is both appalled and amazed at a self-taught sorcerer’s methods of practicing magic. The sorcerer, in turn, is amazed and confused by the wizard’s magical expertise and knowledge. by shleyal19 Very promising start to a good story! If you can, try making a 2nd part to this because I’m fairly intrigued Permalink Parent 5
[WP] A scholarly wizard, taught in a prestigious magic university, is both appalled and amazed at a self-taught sorcerer’s methods of practicing magic. The sorcerer, in turn, is amazed and confused by the wizard’s magical expertise and knowledge. Submitted by shleyal19 t3_10nq902 on January 28, 2023 at 9:35 PM in WritingPrompts 6 comments 98
shleyal19 t1_j0zuq4y wrote on December 20, 2022 at 5:22 PM Reply to comment by SciencesnObjects40 in [WP] Write a story about hope in a post apocalyptic fantasy world. by SciencesnObjects40 I thought a poem would be nicer for this topic than prose, and I think it turned out quite well :D Permalink Parent 2
shleyal19 t1_j0znpsi wrote on December 20, 2022 at 4:37 PM Reply to comment by BroadSpectrumPlacebo in [WP] Write a story about hope in a post apocalyptic fantasy world. by SciencesnObjects40 The end of the world as we know it indeed Permalink Parent 2
shleyal19 t1_j0zmqry wrote on December 20, 2022 at 4:31 PM Reply to [WP] Write a story about hope in a post apocalyptic fantasy world. by SciencesnObjects40 [poem] This plane has been ravaged by spells and by storms. To this day we scavenge to rebuild our forms. The world is rebuilding from its deadly last age, The mountains reform with a flip of the page. Survivors have written in their diaries Of the horrors they wrought that brought life to its knees. Generations to come should act better, they say Lest we get a repeat of the horrid Last Day. From dragons to faeries, we all slowly healed And ventured outside to recall how it feels. The infinite chasms that were marring the lands Are slowly refilled with all our helping hands. The manticore sat next to mortals in peace Only once they’re all fixed will it continue its feasts. The phoenix has risen, and so too shall the earth To continue its cycle, from demise to rebirth. Permalink 2
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Reply to comment by Dontdecahedron in [WP] A scholarly wizard, taught in a prestigious magic university, is both appalled and amazed at a self-taught sorcerer’s methods of practicing magic. The sorcerer, in turn, is amazed and confused by the wizard’s magical expertise and knowledge. by shleyal19
Both characters have a personality radiating off the text, so I think you did well. Also glad you didn’t use humans as the main characters.