so_unstable11

so_unstable11 OP t1_jegirxc wrote

Reply to comment by doggo_with_knife in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

(this one grabed a choke hold on me)

I love the way you treat me.

I love how you don't open the door for me because you know I am independent

I love your so driven that you sometimes forget about me

I love confident you are especially when your wrong

I love how you explain every little thing to me because you care

I love how you always tell me that i need to fix my hair

I love how you like to keep my ego down when you flirt with the woman giving us the check

I love how you make me pay for everything we do because you know how much I like work hard

I love how you always slam the door to make sure I hear that you are off to the bar

I love when you storm off to give me the space I need

I love how I have to say the opposite of what I mean

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so_unstable11 OP t1_jef3h12 wrote

Reply to comment by ChristOnABike122 in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

It might be my self destructive tendencies

But I love you

You hurt me and I coming back

Instead of putting up the boundaries I have been told would be good for me.

You stick your rotten and old too

but I keep coming back to you

I don;t know why I still eat cheese

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so_unstable11 OP t1_jecy6j7 wrote

Reply to comment by nallywallu in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

Rain take the lead 10 months of the year

Our world becomes mud

Just like I fear

Color dulls with each flower bud

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Fishbowl

Any time I took the blinds up

In her robe with her teacup

We live in a fishbowl I was told

"A muddy one at that"

It was a fact

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(It is late I am am going for it I have a test in the morning.)

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so_unstable11 OP t1_jecwnh7 wrote

Reply to comment by Commercial-Cod38 in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

(I had a friend who had to go through this so i worked of what they said I asked them to tell me there feelings and then edited and poem I dont have first hand knowledge so made it short)

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It sucks the life out of me

Radiation therapy

I lose myself

All for the sake of my health

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so_unstable11 OP t1_jechn03 wrote

Reply to comment by Seb_Romu in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

Small children enter a classroom for the first time

Their eyes lighting up like the world at daybreak.

A year beginning.

Little stars ready to shine.

A universe of learning waiting for them

A room revolving around them

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Young adults leave a classroom for the last time

Their eyes watering

A era ending

Stars in there own right

A new side of the world to light up

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so_unstable11 OP t1_jecbry3 wrote

Reply to comment by ivthreadp110 in [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

The man who dies with secrets is a good friend

The man who dies with his riches is evil.

Red is the color of love

Diamonds are the gem of love

Who ever smelt it dealt it

Finders are not keepers

The dance is fun

The animal is scary

My love is pure

Your hate is stronger

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