suburbanchiwriter t1_jec9hzh wrote on March 30, 2023 at 11:27 PM

Reply to [PM] I want to work on my poetry. So I have have promised myself I will write a poem to every prompt. by so_unstable11

Springtime at the Metropolitan Opera.

suburbanchiwriter OP t1_jdqxmd7 wrote on March 26, 2023 at 2:24 PM

Reply to comment by gaborrero in [WP] Your wife of 20 years sits you down for a serious talk. "Where's my husband Tyler?" she asks. You realize that your full-body disguise has started to fail. by suburbanchiwriter

Wow! Very nicely done! I didn't expect the dark turn this story took when I started reading it, but the horror was laced throughout it. The conversation is very realistic, well-written and believable. I can sense Jessica's anger and frustration, almost palpably. And, the ending! *chef's kiss* Thank you for writing this!

suburbanchiwriter OP t1_jdqwata wrote on March 26, 2023 at 2:14 PM

Reply to comment by JohanPertama in [WP] Your wife of 20 years sits you down for a serious talk. "Where's my husband Tyler?" she asks. You realize that your full-body disguise has started to fail. by suburbanchiwriter

A good, short scene. Seems like there's a lot that this could be fleshed out into. Still, well-written and concise.

suburbanchiwriter OP t1_jdqw22j wrote on March 26, 2023 at 2:12 PM

Reply to comment by mischaracterised in [WP] Your wife of 20 years sits you down for a serious talk. "Where's my husband Tyler?" she asks. You realize that your full-body disguise has started to fail. by suburbanchiwriter

Nicely written! I like how intimate the scene is, how much emotion you poured into this conversation between two people who truly care for each other, despite a devastating secret being revealed.

suburbanchiwriter OP t1_jdqv4xh wrote on March 26, 2023 at 2:05 PM

Reply to comment by dogerino295 in [WP] Your wife of 20 years sits you down for a serious talk. "Where's my husband Tyler?" she asks. You realize that your full-body disguise has started to fail. by suburbanchiwriter

Very well done! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Well thought-out, intriguing and revealing just enough to keep me very interested as the story unfolded.

suburbanchiwriter t1_jdfifo0 wrote on March 24, 2023 at 12:41 AM

Reply to comment by lurkerfromstoneage in [OC] Washington, USA. On The Pacific Crest Trail (2240x3360) by 5methoxyDMTs

I've heard that about the Seattle area. I've never talked with anyone who's lived there, though. I'm sorry that the environment is depressing in winter.