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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j9wy3n2 wrote

Reply to comment by valdus in [WP] The aliens, it seems, do not consider us a sentient species because we are unable to 'keeneetaa'. We still haven't figured out what that means. by limbodog

A unified language that your species inherently understands."

"Like a universal language?" Janet asked.

"Not quite, my species has two main languages alongside our keeneeta," she explained, "but it seems like there are many humans who, without a shared language, have no way of understanding one another."

"So if everyone learned the same language?"

"No because you would need to learn it," Dalia pointed out, "a keeneeta is an inherent thing to the birth of a sapient species," Initially reading this seemed like them communicating internally almost in head &

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j8qap3s wrote

Reply to comment by Nightchildd in [OT] Poetry Corner: Fire! by OldBayJ

I like how you start this poem for this verse things feel off I think it would be better with

Like a sunflower fading in September
I'm ready to begin anew
To let my seeds spread and grow
letting something that was great be greater /to let something strong be stronger

Or Our end is near I can feel it
We were good but not the best fit/not meant to be ...
Like a Sunflower in September
Fate decides it's time for me to go.
Use my seeds and remember
all the times we had together.

Or some others depends on what struggles in particular

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j8lq6bq wrote

Reply to comment by ElxirBreauer in [WP] You are kidnapped by the villain regularly, but you’re starting to look forward to it. You know they won’t hurt you, and are simply being dramatic. It also doesn’t help that you are the only person they ever kidnap. This time, the hero doesn’t bother trying to save you. by SkyGriff10

Could turn into mayor being the one not to accept n using power to like float him up, flip him and remove his life energy

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j7oh3h7 wrote

Reply to [WP] After such a long time, God has decided that the design of “man’s best friend” has grown stale, and he’s hired you, an ambitious Angel intern, to make some improvements to the species. by Ruffruffman40

“Sir, for one, all our information suggests that the humans would prefer if they lived on earth longer. Most of them anyways. And if I may ask, what made you decide to resume this project?”

“Ah, you’ve probably seen the dust that looms over earth. Well, you were correct if you assumed this project was one from my childhood. I don’t know. The thought of dogs as man’s best friend just came to me, one day in the shower. I just got motivation to edit it, maybe I’ll look back on Earth and other childhood projects in more depth some other time. What other improvements do you have in mind?”

”Well umm some of the people you’ve made great great great great… well you get the idea grandchildren can be rather horrible to them. And dogs do seem rather wonderful. Perhaps you could increase their protection mechanisms? Apparently, some people abuse them.”

”Abuse? Wow! That was like a centillion ago in our place-time. Yah sure, good idea. Any other ideas?“

”Yah, not just defence against others, dogs are prone to getting poisoned, tumours, hip dysplasia amongst others. Maybe reduce them getting painfully ill in general?”

(End between here to edit, from part right before just did not now let me know if you want me to add more between here and i'll send you the reposted version in another sub)

You really researched and thought this through, good job.”

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j6coh1j wrote

Reply to comment by Outarel in [WP] A man finds a genie's bottle, complete with a real live genie. Instead of blindly asking for wishes, he first asks politely for the genies advice on what to wish for. by mdsmestad

For years i had similar idea as child and some time as teen i just thought to add something like wishing the wish would come through exactly how would want/i want it to with no negative consequences i wouldn't want (not adding exact phrasing now) But yah not that long ago saw lawyer thing( so something i later regret can't happen since no negative unwanted consequences for me not just harms)

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j65frrk wrote

Reply to comment by thoughtsthoughtof in [WP] Every year, a dragon lands in the center of the kingdom and lays two eggs. When the eggs hatch, the two baby dragons then fight to the death. The red one winning means a year of good luck while the blue one winning means a year of bad luck. This year, the dragon laid three eggs. by tsl3161991

Different possibilities including the ywellow one acts sorta calm older sibling stopped fights stuff and luck became more dependent on their actions. Ex: in weeks the one who said to smash it got bad luck particularly if luck wasn't super bad with blue before.

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j64dysn wrote

Reply to comment by Juphikie in [WP] Every year, a dragon lands in the center of the kingdom and lays two eggs. When the eggs hatch, the two baby dragons then fight to the death. The red one winning means a year of good luck while the blue one winning means a year of bad luck. This year, the dragon laid three eggs. by tsl3161991

I was thinking green (purple would work (or yellow) for other stuff though but yah when purple mentioned didn't really think so either) please tag me with next parts

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