ties__shoes

ties__shoes t1_iyt3ax3 wrote

I think it would work better with fewer pictures on the top. Maybe one photo in a banner? I think the main body of text is too small and too long. The double web page call out at the bottom is a little strange. That said I think it looks balanced and that the designer broke up the space well. Although there are too many photos the inclusion of visuals is great.

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